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Cruel Destiny

She felt old and tired, Womb heavy with child. Around, the stately cypress trees Stood guard, protecting the dead, And one especially That lay peacefully in its tomb. Wind softly soughed And moaned like muted sirens That she recollected seeing In an old magical tome. Yet no magic could bring back The lover that had died Just a few weeks ago. The embryo moved slightly in its place As if it knew who rested in the tomb, And she wondered if the father Had also moved in his earthly womb. No tears fell. She left a rose, Dark violet and perfumed On the cold marble slab, Turned and wended her way home To take care of the one That would soon be born.

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Date: 4/21/2022 1:23:00 PM
A sad story well written Victor, one can imagine the heartbreak of losing the father of an unborn child…. Belle
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Date: 4/20/2022 1:44:00 AM
Emotional poem Victor, stirring the heartstrings...Delice
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Date: 4/19/2022 6:12:00 PM
A mothers agony and sorrow, well written piece dear friend,
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Date: 4/19/2022 4:43:00 PM
Victor, a well penned poem full of grief and sadness.
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Date: 4/19/2022 3:32:00 PM
Excellent writing in story telling yet poetic fashion, Victor. Really enjoyed this one
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Date: 4/19/2022 1:28:00 PM
A sad one indeed! Hugs ~ Kim
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Date: 4/19/2022 6:03:00 AM
A very touching piece, Victor, great use of simple vocabulary to create a moving image of the would-be-mother and her grief...
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Date: 4/18/2022 8:23:00 PM
Victor, you've composed a masterpiece. Since your exquisitely designated vernacular, I can sense the bitterness and the burning. This one has a lot of excitement and expression. Well done dear friend.
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Date: 4/18/2022 2:58:00 PM
WoW! Victor, I echo what Sara said. You have penned this well my friend. Have a great day. I hope you had a good Easter:-)Alexis
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Date: 4/18/2022 2:45:00 PM
This one is emotive and expressive. I can feel the sorrow and the longing from the carefully chosen wording. Thanks for your visit to my page today. Sara
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Date: 4/18/2022 2:41:00 PM
Great imagery and feel. A child in the womb by magic knows the presence of love. I hope you had a wonderful easter
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Date: 4/18/2022 10:38:00 AM
A sad and touching tale, but one that also ends on the note of hope and joy that a new life brings. Brilliant writing! :)
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Date: 4/18/2022 7:08:00 AM
Wow, so touching is this, Victor, love it.
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Date: 4/18/2022 6:57:00 AM
A posthumous child will definitely miss its Dad ! A poignant tale so touchingly told ! I feel for the mother who has to bear the burden of a single parent ! Hi, Victor , I didn't see your message ! I hardly open messenger ! I shall look .....
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Date: 4/18/2022 6:41:00 AM
Two sets of images brilliantly portrayed as always, Victor. She mourns a death and she rejoices a life that she must care for. Such is destiny--as you say.
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Date: 4/18/2022 3:08:00 AM
Cruel fate indeed ~ masterfully penned, Victor
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Date: 4/18/2022 3:05:00 AM
Wow… Victor that’s so good! You tell such intriguing beautiful tales! Debx
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