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Crude Blanket

Untrue black feathers
Crawling in a charcoal bed
Drenched in slick darkness

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Andrea Dietrich

May 20, 2010 at 8:19 PM

NIce one. Congratulations, Savannah!

Carol Sunshine Brown

May 18, 2010 at 12:21 PM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's "Tainted Feathers" contest Savannah. Love, Carol

James Fraser

May 16, 2010 at 6:15 AM

Many congratulations on your win in Raul's fine contest >> James

John Freeman

May 14, 2010 at 8:43 PM

Congratulation on your success in the contest. Agape, Moses

Ray Dillard

May 14, 2010 at 6:01 PM

SHBM... You have a good eye! I think you described everything in sight. This is a lonely creature that makes us feel sadness. I hope they find a way to correct the situation...but I fear the worst. RAY

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

May 14, 2010 at 1:09 PM

Congrats S.H. on your winning poem in the Tainted Feathers contest with this awesome write depicting the photo presented so perfectly .. enjoy your top ten win.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..