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Crude Blanket

Untrue black feathers Crawling in a charcoal bed Drenched in slick darkness

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/20/2010 8:19:00 PM

NIce one. Congratulations, Savannah!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/18/2010 12:21:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's "Tainted Feathers" contest Savannah. Love, Carol

James Fraser

Date: 5/16/2010 6:15:00 AM

Many congratulations on your win in Raul's fine contest >> James

John Freeman

Date: 5/14/2010 8:43:00 PM

Congratulation on your success in the contest. Agape, Moses

Ray Dillard

Date: 5/14/2010 6:01:00 PM

SHBM... You have a good eye! I think you described everything in sight. This is a lonely creature that makes us feel sadness. I hope they find a way to correct the situation...but I fear the worst. RAY

Rick Parise

Date: 5/14/2010 5:40:00 PM

A winner indeed~~congrats to you ~dont want to tell, you told you so!!!!!LOL ~~Blessing to you~Rick

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/14/2010 1:09:00 PM

Congrats S.H. on your winning poem in the Tainted Feathers contest with this awesome write depicting the photo presented so perfectly .. enjoy your top ten win.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..