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Crucifixion

A.W. Nutter Condemning chants from the crowd Final resting place growing nearer Death envelopes, in a dark shroud Plunging toward the final chapter Weight of the rough hewn wood More than a young soul can bear To many voices, so misunderstood The sins of the father, mine to fear Sons and daughters, of the damned Anxiously awaiting, my crucifixion Taste for a new soul being fanned As the priest offers the benediction Hand forced open, exposing the palm Three nails, retribution for imagined sin Tearfully reciting the twenty-third psalm Screaming as the metal pierces the skin The holy trinity watching from above Turn a deaf ear, refusing to intervene Ignoring the prayers from the dove As out of control this life careens Hanging on a cross, life upside down Suffering through life and eternity my fate To another hell, a maligned soul is bound Haunted by memories, devoured by hate

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/6/2010 11:30:00 AM
Wow Anthony this sure is so vividly told-- I can almost see this as it unfolds-- I think your talent for describing things is really wonderful and you captured the moment here so well-- one can only imagine what it feels like to be crucified but you conveyed that in this poem of yours-- thank you for all your comments in my poems, happy to make you smile :)-- nikko :)
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Date: 10/17/2010 11:17:00 PM
This person called Jesus is a greater model for men than women. Yet..the man who was supposedly Jesus understood that...acceptance and surrender to ..."thy will be done..." is more and finally more important than personal planning. Your poetry is vivid.
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Date: 10/10/2010 1:56:00 PM
I can't believe its been so long since last i went over your works! shame on me! you have some wonderful things going on here, i love your work its brilliant! thank you for the comments :), and thank you for these wonderful and dark pieces, i love them. great lines and images. Madison
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Date: 10/7/2010 5:54:00 AM
AWESOME! AWESOME! YES! I like, Ilike. More please
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Date: 10/3/2010 1:23:00 PM
ironic you should mention "life upside down" because that's how they did crucifixtions after jesus death.horrible way to die.
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Date: 9/29/2010 2:58:00 AM
great subject matter and eloquently written
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Date: 9/21/2010 9:11:00 PM
YOu sure paint the pain of it all, Anthony. Strong writing! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 9/21/2010 9:00:00 PM
excellent read my friend, so profound, so sad. Harry
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Date: 9/20/2010 4:23:00 AM
speachless - very powerful
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Date: 9/19/2010 2:41:00 PM
HELLO~ ANTHONY ~ENJOYED THE WOW! OF YOUR POEM~He HE HE! Here I find myself all over the soup again. Stopping by to read more poems, before my KIDS make me log out. I had a really nice time reading and catching up with you guys. I posted a sad poem as well, hope you find time to read my latest poem*luv~SKAT
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Date: 9/18/2010 3:42:00 PM
Yes, it was the apostle Peter who was crucified up side down, it is not in the bible but the early christains claimed it to be so...
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Date: 9/18/2010 3:37:00 PM
the entire poem is vivid and raw with feeling, but that last verse, is powerful, now was it not the apostle, St Peter who was crucified upside down, I must go check that out.. anyways, a superior write .. and thanks for your comment on my poetry ~~
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Date: 9/18/2010 6:34:00 AM
Anthony, this is a great write...very enjoyed...Michael
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Date: 9/18/2010 6:00:00 AM
Interesting thoughts that you have penned..I thought that I had this one totally figured out until the last stanza..Now I am not sure..Sara
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Date: 9/18/2010 3:36:00 AM
Very expressive, and all the more poignant for being suffered in vain Anthony. hicky
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Date: 9/18/2010 3:25:00 AM
ooo! Sounds heart pounding Anthony, overwhelming with thoughts of innocent blood. Almost like the crucifixion of a life time. Deep*deep, when it comes to image, enjoyed your poem the twisting and ending where awesome to read,..p.d.
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