Crows

Circling like black crows

On languid farmland thermals

Murder of deadlines

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Barbara Gorelick

March 25, 2014 at 11:22 AM

Wonderful..oh those deadlines. you do know your short forms! BG

Pontus Olin

March 28, 2013 at 5:11 AM

Thanks for the kind words everyone. Glad to be recognized. Even though getting in at 11th place isn't quite a win the way I see it, but that just gives me something to strive for in the future. :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

March 28, 2013 at 4:09 AM

Congratulations on your win Pontus xx

Skat A

March 27, 2013 at 5:34 PM

Pontus, The New Poets of 2013, Congratulations in this contest. Hope to read more of your poems. Take Care*SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

March 24, 2013 at 8:25 PM

Pontus, CONGRATULATIONS with the first poem you posted on the soup :-) it was an honor in hosting this contest for the New Poets of 2013. Thank you for the support. Please enjoy your winning poem. By the way, I posted a blog in honor of the poets who made the list of this contest. The blogs name ----> ""I got the answer :-) What is a poet?"" please check out the blog when you have time. It's a nice gesture from me to you ~ xox ~ LINDA

Poet Destroyer A

March 22, 2013 at 5:58 PM

PONTUS , a nice warm welcome to the soup. My name is Linda, many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. I'm stopping by to invite you to one of my latest contest... called ---> "Only for the New Poets of 2013--the first poem you posted on the soup..." he he he Yes it has a long title. But, I want to give the new poets on the soup the enjoyment and challenges we offer in our contest. If you like please consider my contest. I love the enjoyment of meeting and reading the new poems from all new poets. Thank you for your time~ Always*LINDA

Pontus Olin

March 21, 2013 at 6:38 AM

Thanks for the welcome and the kind comments!

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