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Crowned By White Dove

On dappled shore, wind presses flaming dusk with laced caress, sugar of wine the drenched moon of eve blesses rousing passion’s warm finesse, mouths brush so fine heads laying on grass’ tresses cherishing sighs, air boundless two souls align In fluid rush of moon’s climb, heart-shaped carvings drawn ,enshrined glitters on sand drinking potion so divine, as they whisper tender lines night stars hold hands; comes now movement of fate’s signs time ebbing with true designs of homage spanned While flushed skin traces sea’s strands, he kneels down, meshed eyes expand and like bold glove, slips a ring with buoyant plan oh, her peach arms understand, deep oath of love sealing dreams, glazed petals stand; tide-god nods through light enhanced, crowned by white dove David William's Virelai by nette onclaud

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/10/2012 6:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in David's "Virelai" contest Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/7/2012 4:25:00 PM
Another WOW,so beautiful!! Congrats on your win, Nette! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 8/7/2012 11:26:00 AM
Hey Nettie, Congrats on your win with this beautiful poem-------- me,your sweet fool.
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Date: 8/7/2012 9:38:00 AM
Very romantic and appealing Congratulations nette. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/7/2012 9:35:00 AM
Such winning images - congratulations on a lovely poem.
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Date: 8/7/2012 8:04:00 AM
congrats on your Nette
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Date: 8/7/2012 5:46:00 AM
congratulations on this super win nette xx
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Date: 8/7/2012 4:43:00 AM
Challenging rhymes..great work..congrats, nette! Jag
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Date: 8/7/2012 4:16:00 AM
Nette, congrats on your winning poem, held me from start to end, really like it..David
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Date: 7/24/2012 9:58:00 AM
Awsome!!! Nette...sooo beautiful...you included everything...the whole dream ;) well done...love you bunches, deb
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Date: 7/2/2012 8:12:00 PM
Reminds me of some nights on the beach in Queens, NY. Good write! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 7/2/2012 8:56:00 AM
This is gorgeous, Nette!!! Simply gorgeous!
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Date: 7/1/2012 4:17:00 PM
These rhymes are warm--tresses-blesses...so flowing and fairytale like...Congrats on all your recent wins, Nette. I will miss your poetry while I am away tending to family...Stay the beautiful spirited writer that u are..(.loved the title of this one too! :) gwendolen
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Date: 6/30/2012 12:07:00 PM
Wow, Nette, this is such a gorgeous and sentimental write my good friend! I really enjoyed the touching feelings that emanated from the soul of the poem! This is one of my favorites of all time, awesome write! Great Work!!
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Date: 6/30/2012 7:18:00 AM
Passionate work..Enjoyed reading this morn..Sara
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Date: 6/30/2012 6:29:00 AM
Hmmm.....for David?Good one.
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Date: 6/30/2012 6:11:00 AM
A lovely written poem nette, it warmed my heart (but still cold on the toes....Norway is cold.)-oxox love Anne-Lise
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