Crowned By White Dove

On dappled shore, wind presses flaming dusk with laced caress, sugar of wine the drenched moon of eve blesses rousing passion’s warm finesse, mouths brush so fine heads laying on grass’ tresses cherishing sighs, air boundless two souls align In fluid rush of moon’s climb, heart-shaped carvings drawn ,enshrined glitters on sand drinking potion so divine, as they whisper tender lines night stars hold hands; comes now movement of fate’s signs time ebbing with true designs of homage spanned While flushed skin traces sea’s strands, he kneels down, meshed eyes expand and like bold glove, slips a ring with buoyant plan oh, her peach arms understand, deep oath of love sealing dreams, glazed petals stand; tide-god nods through light enhanced, crowned by white dove David William's Virelai by nette onclaud
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Brown Avatar
August 10, 2012 at 6:14 AM
Congratulations on your placement in David's "Virelai" contest Nette. Love, Carol
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August 7, 2012 at 4:25 PM
Another WOW,so beautiful!! Congrats on your win, Nette! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
Poet Avatar
August 7, 2012 at 11:26 AM
Hey Nettie, Congrats on your win with this beautiful poem-------- me,your sweet fool.
Johnson Avatar
August 7, 2012 at 9:38 AM
Very romantic and appealing Congratulations nette. Love, Joyce
Grisetti Avatar
August 7, 2012 at 9:35 AM
Such winning images - congratulations on a lovely poem.
May Avatar
August 7, 2012 at 8:04 AM
congrats on your Nette
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
August 7, 2012 at 5:46 AM
congratulations on this super win nette xx
Nair Avatar
August 7, 2012 at 4:43 AM
Challenging rhymes..great work..congrats, nette! Jag
Williams Avatar
August 7, 2012 at 4:16 AM
Nette, congrats on your winning poem, held me from start to end, really like it..David
Burch Avatar
July 24, 2012 at 9:58 AM
Awsome!!! Nette...sooo beautiful...you included everything...the whole dream ;) well done...love you bunches, deb
Anish Avatar
July 2, 2012 at 8:12 PM
Reminds me of some nights on the beach in Queens, NY. Good write! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Dietrich Avatar
July 2, 2012 at 8:56 AM
This is gorgeous, Nette!!! Simply gorgeous!
Song Avatar
July 1, 2012 at 4:17 PM
These rhymes are warm--tresses-blesses...so flowing and fairytale like...Congrats on all your recent wins, Nette. I will miss your poetry while I am away tending to family...Stay the beautiful spirited writer that u are..(.loved the title of this one too! :) gwendolen
Sivey Avatar
June 30, 2012 at 12:07 PM
Wow, Nette, this is such a gorgeous and sentimental write my good friend! I really enjoyed the touching feelings that emanated from the soul of the poem! This is one of my favorites of all time, awesome write! Great Work!!
Kendrick Avatar
June 30, 2012 at 7:18 AM
Passionate work..Enjoyed reading this morn..Sara
Poet Avatar
June 30, 2012 at 6:29 AM
Hmmm.....for David?Good one.
Andresen Avatar
June 30, 2012 at 6:11 AM
A lovely written poem nette, it warmed my heart (but still cold on the toes....Norway is cold.)-oxox love Anne-Lise
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