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Crowded Bus's

Early morning rush,
pile's of people piling on
sardine like,jostling
"excuse me" being morning phrase
newspaper's,MP3 player's
magazine's and favorite book's
some smile's,some blank look's
must not of had cup of java yet
small talk infrequent
most want to be left alone
must of had a bad night last night
maybe they don't look forward to today

Everyday's a good day
some are just better

I like public transportation
my favorite indoor sport.........

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007




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