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eyes closed we listen koel sings nodes glisten all’s well but then jarring notes mar zen ripples rise stifling bliss do nothing notice this who within so stumbled bend low we’re humbled fickle fate tests resolve through struggles we evolve poised presence posits peace seeing thus angst decrease bliss again we rebound walking on holy ground

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Date: 3/27/2025 4:32:00 AM
Way to go with this winner. It got it just right. Congratulations. Sara K
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Date: 3/27/2025 8:43:00 AM
Thank you Sara dear :)
Date: 3/26/2025 8:47:00 AM
What doesn't destroy us Makes us stronger enjoyed your poem
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Date: 3/26/2025 7:32:00 PM
:)

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