Crouching Tiger ------ Charlotte's Contest

He was as  beloved as are yours and mine,
A happy and charming, nine year old child,
Stalked by a secretive, crouching tiger,
Hiding in his bloodstream, fearsome and wild.

It was just a little classroom picnic,
Paper bags filled with a nourishing lunch.
Their appetites whetted by the outing
They were a very hungry bunch.

With keen anticipation they stopped
To enjoy the culinary delghts,
But this child must carefully examine his
Before he takes any bites.

Peanut butter sandwich, given away,
Trail mix! He dared not eat any of these,
Leaving him nothing but a small cookie,
His young appetite to appease.

He took one bite, all that was needed
For the crouching tiger within.
His promising life was now ended
Before it could even begin.

There is plenty of blame to go around
Between the parents and the school.
He paid the price for their carelessness,
Allowing the firece tiger to rule.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Freeman Avatar
July 2, 2009 at 9:33 AM
A great, narrate, about a terrible fate, for a small mate, I hope not yours. Godly love to you, jm, Your point is cery clear!
Winter Avatar
May 3, 2009 at 11:41 AM
A senseless tragedy. I am so sorry for your loss if this is someone close to you. To lose a child is unbearable. Your writing, always amazing. Love, Shar
Richards Avatar
May 3, 2009 at 8:00 AM
How tragic.....this sad tale must have a truth...someone close to you? Heart breaking that such a innocuous thing as peanut butter (so it seems) could cause such a terrible thing to happen. Hope this was not a personal story.
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