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Crossroads

My journey has been long a few steps proven wrong I keep searching for a way with the dawn of each day to discover where I belong before I sing a Swan Song I seek a virtuous moral path that will lead me to a much better life A more righteous one without knowing hardships, miseries and strife I've walked with countless burdens; each a heavy albatross on my back And I've grown weary of being dealt yet another losing hand of blackjack At this crossroads I stand A choice at my command Which way shall I choose I'm not offered any clues To bear right or to the left I'm feeling sad and bereft Tears fall as I humbly pray Upon my knees, I now say Give me Your guiding light A North star shining bright Or trills from a nightingale If moonbeams are too pale I need to view a faint glow of hope so I'll surely know the direction of my destiny Time to declare, intrepidly in a clear, reassuring voice the roadway of my choice Hoping it's the one for me The path that sets me free Posted September 24, 2021 Crossroads Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Kim Rodrigues

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Date: 10/18/2021 4:35:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work. Way to go. Sara
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/18/2021 8:24:00 AM
Thank you kindly, Sara
Date: 10/16/2021 12:34:00 PM
Dropping back with many congrats on your win Jenna, the fact you used rhymes shows your true poetry expertise:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/18/2021 8:23:00 AM
Thanks for noticing the end rhyme. Jan.
Date: 10/16/2021 9:06:00 AM
A beautifully designed cross with great poetic writing. Congratulations!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/18/2021 8:23:00 AM
THANKS SO MUCH, CHRIS!
Date: 10/16/2021 6:18:00 AM
You’ve put out there your heart, its sufferings, its longing for relief with lovely imagery! Congratulations, Jenna!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/18/2021 8:22:00 AM
I am so pleased with your contest results...thanks, Kim!
Date: 9/25/2021 4:11:00 AM
wow Jenna, this is amazing, I love the use of rhyme at the end of each line, its exceptionally difficult to do in this form! I know this will place high:-) hugs Jan x
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/18/2021 8:22:00 AM
Thanks a lot, Jan. We both placed high.
Date: 9/24/2021 8:27:00 AM
An outstanding shape poem, Jenna. I haven't tackled this one yet, but I'm not sure I could be successful at it. You succeeded beautifully!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/24/2021 10:18:00 AM
I'm pretty sure you can handle the shape, and I've no doubt you can write about the theme with ease. Thanks so much, Milt.
Date: 9/24/2021 7:53:00 AM
I know whichever path you choose it will be the right one. Love the layout Jenna, very creative. Good luck Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/24/2021 10:17:00 AM
I've made some wrong steps, but so far I've been able to get back on track. Thank you for such encouraging words, Tom.
Date: 9/24/2021 6:45:00 AM
Wow, Jenna, I think this is one of your best, nicely done. Best of luck in the contest. John
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/24/2021 10:17:00 AM
Hi John, and thank you so much for your kind thoughts.
Date: 9/24/2021 6:24:00 AM
Beautiful, Jenna. I love it. Sure it will be a winner. God bless you always. Love, Gina
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/24/2021 10:16:00 AM
It would be an honor if that is so. At any rate, thank you for the support, Gina.

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