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Crossroads

The arrows at The crossroads Offered naught But the truth of All the answers I had sought They were blanched by hope’s long faded sun The meaning of the words too long undone choices that they said should never be made start anew walk alone in shade, separated fearless unafraid I looked Upon the arrow’s-> rotting shaft as I passed I swear the Ravens laughed 9/22/2021 CROSSROADS Poetry Contest

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Date: 10/18/2021 10:54:00 AM
So thoughtfully written John. I love the last line and arrow metaphor/imagery. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 10/18/2021 4:26:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 10/16/2021 4:30:00 PM
I feel your poem is beautiful, yet haunting. Crossroads seem to stir old memories, old choices. I'm making it a favorite. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 10/16/2021 12:23:00 PM
Excellent ink John, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/16/2021 10:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a lovely story/write/shape. Have a blessed autumn day...................
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Date: 10/16/2021 8:58:00 AM
Beautiful cross with a great concept. Congatulations!
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Date: 10/16/2021 6:29:00 AM
Poetic words that deserve more than one read! Putting in my faves! Congratulations, John!
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Date: 9/23/2021 2:56:00 AM
Your poetic imagery made it easy for me to imagine the scene…ravens cawing at me as their beady eyes watched. Excellent writing, John.
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Date: 9/22/2021 10:42:00 AM
Love it! Awesome write. God bless you. Love, Gina
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