John Lawless Poet Shape

Crossroads

The arrows at
The crossroads
Offered naught
But the truth of
All the answers
I  had  sought
They were blanched by hope’s long faded sun
The  meaning of  the  words too  long  undone
choices that they said should never be made
start anew
walk alone
in   shade,
separated
fearless
unafraid
I  looked
Upon the
arrow’s->
rotting shaft
as I passed
I  swear  the
Ravens laughed


9/22/2021

CROSSROADS Poetry Contest

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Sam Kauffman October 18, 2021 at 10:54 AM So thoughtfully written John. I love the last line and arrow metaphor/imagery. Congratulations on your win!

Sara Kendrick October 18, 2021 at 4:26 AM Congrats on your winning work. Way to go. Sara

Ann Peck October 16, 2021 at 4:30 PM I feel your poem is beautiful, yet haunting. Crossroads seem to stir old memories, old choices. I'm making it a favorite. Congratulations on your win!

Jan Allison October 16, 2021 at 12:23 PM Excellent ink John, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Paula Goldsmith October 16, 2021 at 10:49 AM Congratulations on your win. What a lovely story/write/shape. Have a blessed autumn day...................

Christuraj Alex October 16, 2021 at 8:58 AM Beautiful cross with a great concept. Congatulations!

Kim Rodrigues October 16, 2021 at 6:29 AM Poetic words that deserve more than one read! Putting in my faves! Congratulations, John!

Jenna Logan September 23, 2021 at 2:56 AM Your poetic imagery made it easy for me to imagine the scene…ravens cawing at me as their beady eyes watched. Excellent writing, John.

Regina Mcintosh September 22, 2021 at 10:42 AM Love it! Awesome write. God bless you. Love, Gina