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Crossroad of My Life

" Like a fish caught in a cruel net; or a bird caught in a trap, in the same way a person can be trapped; by bad things that suddenly happen." Based on Ecclesiastes 9:12 __________________________________ I have lived life on a collision course, but, I have now come to a turning point; and I have wept tears until I am hoarse. Have been galloping on a magic horse, never stopping at a single checkpoint; I have lived life on a collision course. Have worn bright diamonds and violet quartz, even in youth smoked an illegal joint; and I have wept tears until I am hoarse. But, that is all behind me as time warps, oh, I never wanted to disappoint; I have lived life on a collision course. Have been trapped with no escape source, even my gentleness- others did exploit; and I have wept tears until I am hoarse. At this juncture- a new me I endorse, my race against time is over- I rejoice; I have lived life on a collision course, and I have wept tears until I am hoarse. ______________________________ September 15, 2019 Poetry/Villanelle/Crossroads in My Life Copyright Protected, ID 19- 1181-345-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Crossroads sponsor, Silent One Second Place

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Date: 9/24/2019 12:43:00 PM
- Congratulations on your lovely win poem, D.H. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Constance La France
Date: 9/24/2019 4:22:00 PM
Anne-Lise thank you for the lovely and the congratulations!
Date: 9/23/2019 11:46:00 AM
We are each, ever on that collision course of time. Congrats, well penned.
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Constance La France
Date: 9/23/2019 12:41:00 PM
DM, so true and thanks for the congrats and the compliment !
Date: 9/23/2019 10:16:00 AM
My friend, Congratulations on your placement in SilentOne's Crossroads contest!
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Constance La France
Date: 9/23/2019 12:42:00 PM
Robert, thank you so much !
Date: 9/23/2019 6:17:00 AM
Touching and beautiful ... The assertion I rejoice is indeed vibrant ... Congratulations on your nice placement, Dear Heart ...
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Constance La France
Date: 9/23/2019 12:42:00 PM
Probir thanks for the compliment and the congratulations !
Date: 9/22/2019 4:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest...
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Constance La France
Date: 9/22/2019 9:03:00 PM
Silent, thank you for another inspiring contest and for my great placement !
Date: 9/18/2019 5:03:00 PM
Love it Dear Heart
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Constance La France
Date: 9/19/2019 7:24:00 AM
Thank you Timothy!
Date: 9/17/2019 8:21:00 PM
Wow! BW, This is a good Villianelle for the contest theme. It's good to hear you are in new chapter in your life. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Have a great night my friend:-) Alexis
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Constance La France
Date: 9/19/2019 7:25:00 AM
Hi Alexis, thank you for the compliment. Each dawn is a new beginning.
Date: 9/17/2019 7:19:00 PM
This is a beautifully penned Villanelle, i have written one or two, they are a harder form and you made it look so easy, great flow...great write! :) hugs
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Constance La France
Date: 9/17/2019 7:46:00 PM
Sandra, thanks for the compliment. I found the form very difficult to make the poem make sense with all those repeating lines.
Date: 9/15/2019 7:33:00 PM
“I have lived life on a collusion course” - truly made me smile.
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Constance La France
Date: 9/17/2019 7:44:00 PM
Hi Caren.. yeah I like that line too, pretty much describes my life !
Date: 9/15/2019 5:15:00 PM
So true... blessings
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Constance La France
Date: 9/15/2019 5:48:00 PM
Regina, thank you so much for visiting

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