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Crossing the river, we shiver For the water is cold Each tremor, not the same quiver So how may it be told Granting life flow consent At each moment present Transmit blissful intent Taker or giver Crossing the river 29-November-2021 Quietus

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Date: 11/30/2021 9:37:00 PM
A delightful poem and an even more delightful photo!
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Date: 11/29/2021 1:36:00 AM
A romantic tease. Loved it.
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Date: 11/28/2021 10:47:00 PM
A poem to think upon, yes the other side. Thanks ever so much for my placement in your contest. Harry
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Date: 11/28/2021 11:06:00 PM
Happy you enjoyed, Harry! Thanks for participating in the contest … your poem was outstanding, no wonder it was honoured by POTD too!
Date: 11/28/2021 9:35:00 PM
I like the thoughts on transition in Crossing the River, Unseeking Seeker. A poet friend, Bill
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Date: 11/28/2021 11:05:00 PM
Thank you Bill!

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