Unseeking Seeker Poet Rhyme

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Crossing the River

Crossing the river, we shiver
For the water is cold
Each tremor, not the same quiver
So how may it be told

Granting life flow consent
At each moment present 
Transmit blissful intent

Taker or giver
Crossing the river

29-November-2021
Quietus 

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Caren Krutsinger November 30, 2021 at 9:37 PM A delightful poem and an even more delightful photo!

Victor Buhagiar November 29, 2021 at 1:36 AM A romantic tease. Loved it.

Harry Horsman November 28, 2021 at 10:47 PM A poem to think upon, yes the other side. Thanks ever so much for my placement in your contest. Harry Unseeking Seeker November 28, 2021 at 11:06 PM Happy you enjoyed, Harry! Thanks for participating in the contest … your poem was outstanding, no wonder it was honoured by POTD too!

Bill Baker November 28, 2021 at 9:35 PM I like the thoughts on transition in Crossing the River, Unseeking Seeker. A poet friend, Bill Unseeking Seeker November 28, 2021 at 11:05 PM Thank you Bill!