Crossing the Desert of Life

Who’s that Standing 

On the Corner of my mind

Shouting out Insanities  

Throwing up a hate Blind

Saying I’ve been Abused 

Violence will justify the Crime

Pretending, he Cares about me 

Secretly Planing my demise


What's that Thing Poisoning my heart in pain
 
Coloring my eyes Red wishing you would suffer

Pointing at YOU to blame

Surely, he walked in Uninvited while on my Knees I cried

When Desperation turned to Darkness

Good God I never felt YOU by my side


What's that voice Slyly questioning 

Sowing Doubts in fields of hope

Get behind me Wicked one 

Tempt Someone else 

Mixing your Truth with lies

I don't Care for it
 
I was Born to Live  and YOU were made to Die

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 11/30/2018 7:21:00 PM
AMEN!!! That is well observed, written and delivered! So far one of my favorites! (But I have to read more of your works!)
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Date: 5/29/2018 5:24:00 PM
Wow; cool -JT
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Date: 4/9/2018 9:05:00 AM
Powerful poem! We all need to follow this example! VERY well written!
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Date: 4/8/2018 12:20:00 PM
The struggle is real. Excellent observation.
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Date: 4/7/2018 7:42:00 AM
good work there.
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Date: 4/6/2018 2:20:00 PM
I have missed this beauty of a poem dear friend, Arturo! Congratulations for POTD!
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Date: 4/6/2018 8:25:00 AM
Oooooo I like this one my friend very deep and inspirational...makes me think of this text: 1 Corinthians 10:13 New King James Version (NKJV) 13 No temptation has overtaken you except such as is common to man; but God is faithful, who will not allow you to be tempted beyond what you are able, but with the temptation will also make the way of escape, that you may be able to bear it. compelling poem my friend!
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Date: 4/4/2018 11:07:00 AM
Powerful poetry, Arturo! Well written lines of devotional passion. Kudos on POTD. This is one jewel of a poem. Love and joy always.
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Date: 4/4/2018 10:37:00 AM
riveting work which deserves a POTD award, arturo... bravo!... huggs
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Date: 4/3/2018 2:10:00 AM
Excellent poem. Well penned with powerful words. Congratulations on POTD my friend. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 4/3/2018 5:37:00 AM
Thank you Ravi... All the best my friend
Date: 3/31/2018 3:29:00 PM
Powerful and a need to write. the subject matter, today's reality..wonderful poetry like this, highlights the tragedy.
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Date: 4/3/2018 5:36:00 AM
Thank you Harry...All the best to you my friend...
Date: 3/31/2018 12:10:00 PM
I did not realize the theme until I reached "Get behind me", although I knew it was about abuse. Either way a wonderful write. I add my congratulations.
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Date: 3/30/2018 4:32:00 AM
Hello Arturo, Best Congratulations to you on POTD with this most excellent selection!! Powerfully and passionately done!! The last verse is the perfect ending. Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 3/30/2018 5:34:00 AM
Good Friday Gary...Nice to see you...All the best to you and yours...
Date: 3/29/2018 7:50:00 PM
Congratulations on potd Aturo! All the best to you my friend. xomo
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Date: 3/29/2018 7:58:00 PM
Thank you Maureen... All the best to you and Goggles
Date: 3/29/2018 4:46:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD Arturo. Inspiring write. reminds me of my dad. he used to always say, "Get thee behind me , Satan."
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Date: 3/29/2018 5:55:00 PM
And he was right to say so... it's his mind...who he invites in must be kind...Thank you Daniel...Happy Easter to you and yours...
Date: 3/29/2018 3:45:00 PM
Hey congrats on POTD!!
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Date: 3/29/2018 5:58:00 PM
Thanks to you...It's good to be amongst poets...one of those stars is you...All the best...
Date: 3/29/2018 1:04:00 PM
Congrats!!! my poetic amigo on POTD!!!...excellent verse my friend...stay in the light...^WW^
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Date: 3/29/2018 6:04:00 PM
May the blood of Christ wash over you and cleanse you with love... Thanks, my friend...When I review the poems you inspired me to write...I remember you...
Date: 3/29/2018 11:10:00 AM
Beautifully written Arturo, I have felt what you have wrote my friend. And I'm sure most everyone has. Congrats on your POTD my friend....Charles
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Date: 3/29/2018 6:06:00 PM
Thank you, Charles... Sensitive souls we are...I wish you a happy Easter...and all the best to you...
Date: 3/29/2018 10:15:00 AM
Perfect timing Arturo, congratulations for POTD honors...
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Date: 3/29/2018 6:11:00 PM
Yeah...Somehow... The poem was done on the spot...no planning...yet came right out...I'd like to believe I'm riding the horse and not the horse taking me for a ride...All the best Charlie...have a happy Easter...
Date: 3/29/2018 9:32:00 AM
Very well written! I can identify. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/29/2018 10:04:00 AM
Thank you Sunlite...Happy Easter to you...All the best my friend...
Date: 3/29/2018 7:51:00 AM
Congrats on your awesome POTD, Arturo! Hugs :)
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Date: 3/29/2018 10:03:00 AM
Thank you Akkina...Happy Easter to you and yours...All the best
Date: 3/29/2018 7:45:00 AM
Congrats on the POTD Arturo, well deserved...Maria
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Date: 3/29/2018 6:22:00 PM
How would you describe a virtual poem?...it stands out in 3D... I want to hear what you think it would be... A one line two line three...power words...what can be said in an inhale and exhaled naturally...
Date: 3/29/2018 7:34:00 AM
Powerfully penned Arturo, many congrats on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/29/2018 10:02:00 AM
Thank you Jan...Happy Easter to you and yours...All the best...
Date: 3/29/2018 7:22:00 AM
Congrats on POTD, Arturo.
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Date: 3/29/2018 10:01:00 AM
Always lovely to hear from you Agnes...Happy Easter...All the best
Date: 3/29/2018 7:19:00 AM
- A powerful poem, Arturo - Love the end - Congratulations with your p.o.t.d., well deserved - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/29/2018 10:01:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise...Happy Easter to you and yours...All the best
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