Crossing Lines

Setting boundaries
A lesson learned, sometimes late
May simplify daily lives
Minimize regrets 
Lives ruined crossing lines
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Wellington Avatar
September 23, 2010 at 6:53 AM
I did read your "All That I Am" and WOW!! Thats saying it all. That man better feel lucky, because you have pledged to love him into "Infinity". Smile. Luv Joy (Jew)
Wellington Avatar
September 23, 2010 at 6:46 AM
There is much to be said for setting boundaries, as this could save us a lot of pain...so true Audrey. Keep penning your marvelous writes. Love Joy (Jew)
Horsman Avatar
September 22, 2010 at 9:55 PM
Another brilliant "Line Poem" i've read today, good luck, awesome read. Harry
Rhinem Avatar
September 22, 2010 at 7:56 PM
Smile ~ And aside from this "Dear Beautiful Audrey Carey" & in regards unto crossing lines? Always be aware of ones environment & those about oneself &, "Let 'Heaven' Draw 'The Lines!!!'" ~ "Much Love & Warmth to 'You Always' &, All You Love, 'Forever,'" John! ~ Smile, "Have The Most Blessed & Beautiful of Tomorrows 'Dear, Beautiful Audrey,' Amid 'The Tender & Loving Embraces' of, Beautiful Hearts & Souls Within, 'Beautiful Love;'" Bye, "Dear Beautiful Lady!":) ~
Rhinem Avatar
September 22, 2010 at 7:42 PM
Smile ~ "Hello 'Dear Beautiful, Lovely, Precious & Priceless, Audrey Carey!!!'" ~ I hope that "Your Treasures" had the most radiant of days dear & that school has been returning "Your Splendours" unto that youthful joy of such an experiences surroundings for, I know that when I returned for a class' moments here & there dear, I absorbed the wonders amid the energy & the dreams of those young hearts & souls about myself ~ ....Cont:)
Rhinem Avatar
September 22, 2010 at 7:24 PM
Smile ~ "Yes," but hopefully not at a place such as a poetic setting accessible to the entire world for, this would be pretty sad unto myself it would somehow seem my dearest lady, to say the absolute & very least, actually!!! ~ And yet, upon the other hand & within many different scenarios & settings again, "Yes," crossing certain lines can whether right or wrong, have rippling affects perhaps not so pleasant!? ~ ....Cont:)
Hales Avatar
September 22, 2010 at 4:22 PM
Powerfullllllll love it sarah x
Devonshire Avatar
September 22, 2010 at 3:37 PM
How true, Audrey. And this poem applies to so many things in life. excellent work! Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
September 22, 2010 at 3:19 PM
Very creative and fine entry for the contest, Audrey
Falotico Avatar
September 22, 2010 at 2:01 PM
wonderful enry for contest, best of luck...Michael
Sweetheart Avatar
September 22, 2010 at 1:06 PM
WoW ..my BFF this is also a great entry for the Line contest... as well as Chris's Tanka contest... good luck ... awesome message... enjoyed ..my entry is "Steamy"...what else? haha..luv..your BFF forever...
Roberts Avatar
September 22, 2010 at 11:15 AM
nice one, much enjoyed
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