Crossing Lines

Setting boundaries
A lesson learned, sometimes late
May simplify daily lives
Minimize regrets 
Lives ruined crossing lines

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 9/23/2010 6:53:00 AM
I did read your "All That I Am" and WOW!! Thats saying it all. That man better feel lucky, because you have pledged to love him into "Infinity". Smile. Luv Joy (Jew)
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Date: 9/23/2010 6:46:00 AM
There is much to be said for setting boundaries, as this could save us a lot of pain...so true Audrey. Keep penning your marvelous writes. Love Joy (Jew)
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Date: 9/22/2010 9:55:00 PM
Another brilliant "Line Poem" i've read today, good luck, awesome read. Harry
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Date: 9/22/2010 7:56:00 PM
Smile ~ And aside from this "Dear Beautiful Audrey Carey" & in regards unto crossing lines? Always be aware of ones environment & those about oneself &, "Let 'Heaven' Draw 'The Lines!!!'" ~ "Much Love & Warmth to 'You Always' &, All You Love, 'Forever,'" John! ~ Smile, "Have The Most Blessed & Beautiful of Tomorrows 'Dear, Beautiful Audrey,' Amid 'The Tender & Loving Embraces' of, Beautiful Hearts & Souls Within, 'Beautiful Love;'" Bye, "Dear Beautiful Lady!":) ~
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Date: 9/22/2010 7:42:00 PM
Smile ~ "Hello 'Dear Beautiful, Lovely, Precious & Priceless, Audrey Carey!!!'" ~ I hope that "Your Treasures" had the most radiant of days dear & that school has been returning "Your Splendours" unto that youthful joy of such an experiences surroundings for, I know that when I returned for a class' moments here & there dear, I absorbed the wonders amid the energy & the dreams of those young hearts & souls about myself ~ ....Cont:)
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Date: 9/22/2010 7:24:00 PM
Smile ~ "Yes," but hopefully not at a place such as a poetic setting accessible to the entire world for, this would be pretty sad unto myself it would somehow seem my dearest lady, to say the absolute & very least, actually!!! ~ And yet, upon the other hand & within many different scenarios & settings again, "Yes," crossing certain lines can whether right or wrong, have rippling affects perhaps not so pleasant!? ~ ....Cont:)
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Date: 9/22/2010 4:22:00 PM
Powerfullllllll love it sarah x
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Date: 9/22/2010 3:37:00 PM
How true, Audrey. And this poem applies to so many things in life. excellent work! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/22/2010 3:19:00 PM
Very creative and fine entry for the contest, Audrey
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Date: 9/22/2010 2:01:00 PM
wonderful enry for contest, best of luck...Michael
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Date: 9/22/2010 1:06:00 PM
WoW ..my BFF this is also a great entry for the Line contest... as well as Chris's Tanka contest... good luck ... awesome message... enjoyed ..my entry is "Steamy"...what else? haha..luv..your BFF forever...
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Date: 9/22/2010 11:15:00 AM
nice one, much enjoyed
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