Laura Breidenthal Poet Free verse

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Wholehearted, I plunge
I love you strong
Then you change 
You stay yet fade away...
You're not breathing for me no more
You are waiting till I tire 
Till I realize..
No one can stop you
No one can hold you

I exhale grief...
You're bored
You're wrong
You're gone.

August 2, 2017

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Justin Bordner September 24, 2017 at 6:20 PM Your plaintive passion is based in love's law...your heart, in the jurisdiction of survival. The clarity of this poem is very moving Poetess...J.A.B. Laura Breidenthal September 29, 2017 at 8:38 PM Thanks Justin. Writing this poem I was in a state of numbness and acceptance. <3~Laura

Nette Onclaud August 4, 2017 at 2:45 PM such pain and beauty in this write so brief but full, laura.. good to read you again!..huggs Laura Breidenthal August 5, 2017 at 11:21 AM Thanks for stopping by to read, you're so very sweet! <3 ~Laura