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Crossfade

Wholehearted, I plunge I love you strong Then you change You stay yet fade away... You're not breathing for me no more You are waiting till I tire Till I realize.. No one can stop you No one can hold you I exhale grief... You're bored You're wrong You're gone. August 2, 2017

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Justin Bordner

Date: 9/24/2017 6:20:00 PM

Your plaintive passion is based in love's law...your heart, in the jurisdiction of survival. The clarity of this poem is very moving Poetess...J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 9/29/2017 8:38:00 PM

Thanks Justin. Writing this poem I was in a state of numbness and acceptance. <3~Laura

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/4/2017 2:45:00 PM

such pain and beauty in this write so brief but full, laura.. good to read you again!..huggs

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 8/5/2017 11:21:00 AM

Thanks for stopping by to read, you're so very sweet! <3 ~Laura