Jslambert Mister Roboto Poet Rhyme

Crossed Me At the Borderline, Just In Time

-------------------------------------- ~*note: done in fun and aimed at no one~  



try and seed my name you'll concede to shame
no use in calling names to lose the game

yir' ill will is just plain disastrous 
asinine avatars deserve an asterisk

as for being fact-less, your slaps don't diss
every lick you spit simply tends to miss

harmless words that curse, rehearsed childishness
gets your face erased and they'll say who's next

as defilement arrives inside your text
that's when shame wheels you back, right to the nest.


~10 syllables in each of 10 rhyming lines~

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Shadow Hamilton August 12, 2014 at 10:41 PM this is a vey clever pen JS with much hidden between the lines adding to favs hugs

Lucilla Carrillo August 5, 2014 at 8:54 PM Your poetry is different, but it's good. I like it. Keep writing whatever your heart tells you. Thanks for sharing... lucilla Jslambert Mister Roboto August 5, 2014 at 10:21 PM much love and appreciation Lucilla, hang in there!~

Tim Smith August 3, 2014 at 8:05 AM Excellent.. It is a perfect rap beat...nice slam

Andrea Dietrich August 2, 2014 at 1:07 AM hmmm methinks there may have been somebody this was about!! Nice to see you try something different! Jslambert Mister Roboto August 2, 2014 at 11:05 AM methinks San Andreas pays close attention to Mine Twixt Breadth.

Jslambert Mister Roboto August 1, 2014 at 9:51 AM Perhaps it's a lose lose situation for me here..., I never did write : "just kidding" ....rather, in order to insure that someone here on the Soup doesn't think this was a call out, a threat, or anything offensive... I simply placed a disclaimer as a prelude. Sure as I didn't, one may say I was spreading hate. For me, Poetry is blips and random words with little or zero thought. Often they come out cheery and nice, other times, not so nice...Many times the "offensive" tones are self loathing

Eileen Manassian August 1, 2014 at 5:23 AM Someone once said, there is a little truth in every JUST KIDDING...or in every rhyme! Thanks for your visits. Jslambert Mister Roboto August 1, 2014 at 8:33 AM excellent point! I'm simply a journalist for the wellspring of creativity ticker taping above my head.

Robert Lindley July 31, 2014 at 10:11 PM Very glad it was done in fun my friend. Nicely done. Jslambert Mister Roboto August 1, 2014 at 8:33 AM I hope you think so.