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Crossed Lines

once you cross the line
there is no way to turn back
words can't be undone...

once you break a heart
there is no way to heal it
the cracks will show through

Eileen Manassian

Copyright © Eileen Manassian | Year Posted 2016

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Sara Kendrick Date: 2/26/2016 11:45:00 AM A broken heart will always carry a scar that is a weak place but thank God he can heal and renew and uplift the broken hearted..Thanks for the visit to my page..My children are ages 52, 51 and 48..Then I have the grandsons 28, 17, and 5..God blessed us in giving us a space in between the grandsons so that we could enjoy each one individually..Sara Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 2/26/2016 12:06:00 PM I'm so happy for you, dear. Children and grandchildren are a lovely blessing from God. Hugs

Richard Lamoureux Date: 2/23/2016 7:24:00 AM So true. Hugs Rick. Login to Reply

Anthony Mark Date: 2/23/2016 12:12:00 AM nice write , line one says " lines" plural, should that be " line " as in cross the line ? first line second stanza " "once you" not " once your" clearly an emotional write ...mark Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 2/24/2016 5:13:00 AM Thank you, Mark. Or sould I use you're real name to thank you. Anthony Mark Date: 2/24/2016 1:07:00 AM Cheers for the typo spots, just wish the other " skimmers" had really taken the time to read it, and seen the two lirrle errors, ...cheers Mark...

Timothy Hicks Date: 2/22/2016 11:10:00 PM Hope this is not due to personal (and or recent) experience Eileen. Powerful pen. Words spoken in the heat of the moment are hard to forget ... but eventually we have to move on. In Japan there is an art, where people take broken or cracked pottery, and fill the cracks with liquid gold. When it hardens it signifies that we are more beautiful ... after we are broken. I hope this is the same with you, Eileen. When push comes to shove we come back stronger and more passionate. Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 2/23/2016 7:23:00 AM It creates some beautiful pieces.