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My feet caressed by the washed sand my eyes lost in the horizons gaze soothing essence fills the land but in my heart there is a blaze two days back and my heart was taken it shone over the entire ocean now the fire within leaves me shaking my joy now runs with the waves that get broken a broken heart in need of love must find joy someway somehow so there is hope in the sky above and with that hope grab on now the night may make the sun disappear but by the next mourning the sun reappears *Entered into "First Poem" Contest -Won HM

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Date: 1/25/2012 7:26:00 PM
Good start.
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Date: 6/2/2011 1:59:00 AM
Hey there Ashley, congratulations on your win in Pd's contest :) WN
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Date: 6/2/2011 12:54:00 AM
grats on your awesome contest entry Luv*Skat
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Date: 6/1/2011 7:50:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Ashley. Great job. Ralph
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Ashley Plotczyk
Date: 6/1/2011 12:14:00 PM
Much appriciated thank you.
Date: 6/1/2011 7:21:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of p.d.Ashley
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Ashley Plotczyk
Date: 6/1/2011 12:14:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 6/1/2011 6:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in P.D.'s contest Ashley. Love, Carol
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Ashley Plotczyk
Date: 6/1/2011 12:15:00 PM
Thank you so much!
Date: 6/1/2011 12:32:00 AM
A.P.!~ CONGRATS!! In my first poem contest, & thank U so much once again 4 supporting my contest. I had a great time reading & judging every entry in my contest. Thanks for being among all my chosen winners. have a great one,.. always~~~Poet D
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Ashley Plotczyk
Date: 6/1/2011 12:16:00 PM
It's an honor. Thank you for the opportunity.
Date: 5/31/2011 9:44:00 PM
congrats Ashley on your excellent win tonight in this contest..enjoy sweet success luv..
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Ashley Plotczyk
Date: 6/1/2011 12:17:00 PM
Thank you (:
Date: 5/19/2011 6:40:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Ashley. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/19/2011 3:05:00 AM
You've perfectly captured these emotions, Ashley. I love your play on words with mourning - very nice touch
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Ashley Plotczyk
Date: 6/1/2011 12:19:00 PM
Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it.

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