Cross Fate

My feet caressed by the washed sand
my eyes lost in the horizons gaze 
soothing essence fills the land
but in my heart there is a blaze
two days back and my heart was taken
it shone over the entire ocean
now the fire within leaves me shaking 
my joy now runs with the waves that get broken
a broken heart in need of love
must find joy someway somehow
so there is hope in the sky above
and with that hope grab on now 
the night may make the sun disappear
but by the next mourning the sun reappears 

*Entered into "First Poem" Contest
-Won HM
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Suzadail Jr. Avatar
January 25, 2012 at 7:26 PM
Good start.
Neels Avatar
June 2, 2011 at 1:59 AM
Hey there Ashley, congratulations on your win in Pd's contest :) WN
A  Avatar
June 2, 2011 at 12:54 AM
grats on your awesome contest entry Luv*Skat
Taylor Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 7:50 AM
Congrats on your win, Ashley. Great job. Ralph
Plotczyk Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 12:14 PM
Much appriciated thank you.
Mehta Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 7:21 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of p.d.Ashley
Plotczyk Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 12:14 PM
Thank you!
Brown Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 6:04 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in P.D.'s contest Ashley. Love, Carol
Plotczyk Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 12:15 PM
Thank you so much!
A   Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 12:32 AM
A.P.!~ CONGRATS!! In my first poem contest, & thank U so much once again 4 supporting my contest. I had a great time reading & judging every entry in my contest. Thanks for being among all my chosen winners. have a great one,.. always~~~Poet D
Plotczyk Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 12:16 PM
It's an honor. Thank you for the opportunity.
Sweetheart Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 9:44 PM
congrats Ashley on your excellent win tonight in this contest..enjoy sweet success luv..
Plotczyk Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 12:17 PM
Thank you (:
Brown Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 6:40 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Ashley. Love, Carol
Horne Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 3:05 AM
You've perfectly captured these emotions, Ashley. I love your play on words with mourning - very nice touch
Plotczyk Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 12:19 PM
Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it.
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