Crooning Carolers

Curious children try to catch a glimpse as 
 Santa's sleigh sails silently and swiftly

Coming closer and closer as Christmas  closes in
Exciting everyone eagerly expecting enjoyment

Making mellow music  in merriment
Mistletoe magic makes many kiss

Presents placed proudly under the tree as
Flames  from  the fireplace dance through the night

Shoppers see savings on super sales as
Crooning carolers capture the Christmas spirit
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Kendrick Avatar
December 30, 2013 at 12:41 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
Guzzi Avatar
December 27, 2013 at 7:31 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Horsch Avatar
December 27, 2013 at 9:05 AM
Boy, you can really write descriptively. Another nice win. Congrats....Roger
Mehta Avatar
December 26, 2013 at 7:39 PM
Lovely poem with alliteration and congratulations on your fine win, Joseph
Dietrich Avatar
December 26, 2013 at 3:57 PM
Great show of alliteration! Congrats, Joe.
May Avatar
December 26, 2013 at 6:43 PM
thank you Andrea
May Avatar
December 26, 2013 at 6:43 PM
Harper Avatar
December 26, 2013 at 2:36 PM
Joseph, I love your light touch with alliteration, it enhances without making the reader stumble. Also the sense of fun and the spirit of the season come together in a complete poem. Congratulations on your win, thanks much for entering my contest!
May Avatar
December 26, 2013 at 6:44 PM
thank you for my placement in your contest Sheri
Dietrich Avatar
December 18, 2013 at 3:18 PM
way to do the contest, JOseph. I enjoyed this.
May Avatar
December 26, 2013 at 6:45 PM
thanks Andrea
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