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Crooning Carolers

Curious children try to catch a glimpse as Santa's sleigh sails silently and swiftly Coming closer and closer as Christmas closes in Exciting everyone eagerly expecting enjoyment Making mellow music in merriment Mistletoe magic makes many kiss Presents placed proudly under the tree as Flames from the fireplace dance through the night Shoppers see savings on super sales as Crooning carolers capture the Christmas spirit

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Date: 12/30/2013 12:41:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 12/27/2013 7:31:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 12/27/2013 9:05:00 AM
Boy, you can really write descriptively. Another nice win. Congrats....Roger
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Date: 12/26/2013 7:39:00 PM
Lovely poem with alliteration and congratulations on your fine win, Joseph
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Date: 12/26/2013 3:57:00 PM
Great show of alliteration! Congrats, Joe.
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Joseph May
Date: 12/26/2013 6:43:00 PM
thank you Andrea
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Joseph May
Date: 12/26/2013 6:43:00 PM
Date: 12/26/2013 2:36:00 PM
Joseph, I love your light touch with alliteration, it enhances without making the reader stumble. Also the sense of fun and the spirit of the season come together in a complete poem. Congratulations on your win, thanks much for entering my contest!
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Joseph May
Date: 12/26/2013 6:44:00 PM
thank you for my placement in your contest Sheri
Date: 12/18/2013 3:18:00 PM
way to do the contest, JOseph. I enjoyed this.
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Joseph May
Date: 12/26/2013 6:45:00 PM
thanks Andrea

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