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Crocodile Tears

i ate the chocolate mint in typical hedonist fashion i devoured it licked off a bit of sweet that clung to the crocodile picture enclosed slathered my tongue over the wrapper's inner side envirocandy endangered species read the card felt something

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/1/2013 3:10:00 AM
Maggie was it guilt? It is an excellent write....David
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Maggie Huffman
Date: 4/7/2013 6:26:00 PM
yes...no...it was good candy...thanks for your comments...very encouraging!
Date: 3/31/2013 4:45:00 PM
Good one, Maggie :). Taking one through the process. I like the end "felt something".
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Maggie Huffman
Date: 4/7/2013 6:23:00 PM
Thanks Toquyen...you're very encouraging and insightful

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