Crocodile Surf

CROCODILE  SURF



Curving surf and plunging
Breakers  open up and and snarl over
And slap down closed,
Crest of breaker a jagged rim
Dripping long fangs of water
Before snapping shut,
And the surfer disappears
Threshing helplessly in the spume
Of the jaws and the foaming saliva.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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September 11, 2015 at 10:38 AM
Sidney, Very well done, clever and well crafted...George
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