Crocodile

There was an old man from Carlisle
    Who went for a swim in the Nile.
    He soon gasped with despair
    When he came up for air.
    He's now just a crocodile's smile.

    4/ 9/ 2018.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Roper Avatar
April 14, 2018 at 11:00 AM
Great funny Limerick, George, congratulations on your Win!!! Hugs Eve
Gentry Avatar
April 14, 2018 at 9:46 AM
Lol! Like it. Congratulations on your win with this clever well-written limerick!
Dietrich Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 5:07 PM
Wow, this is amazing, George. If I had to divide up the multiple top placements into the very best three, I would be hard pressed whether to put this one first, second or third. For me it's one of the very best.
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 3:54 PM
I loved your limerick George. Congratulations on your win with this clever cute limerick! : )
Callus Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 3:44 PM
Very clever and witty, George! Congratulations on your fine win! Regards // paul
Devonshire Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 2:48 PM
Oooh, such a great use of dark humor, George. Congratulations on your well deserved win!
Richards Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 12:18 PM
He should have taken a boat !! LOL !!! Poor guy ! What a great limerick !! Congrats to you !!
Smith Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 12:10 PM
Terrific George, congratulations...
Rodrigues Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 8:19 AM
Congrats!
Gauthier Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 4:57 AM
Back with well deserved congrats on your podium finish, George.
Allison Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 3:09 AM
many congrats George:-) hugs jan xx
Y. Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 1:17 AM
Hi George, Congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis
Gauthier Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 8:39 PM
LOL That is a wonderful limerick. Well done, George.
Allison Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 3:00 PM
ha ha ha love it George:-) hugs jan xx
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