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Critters,
Yucky, icky,
Creepy, crawly, nasty,
Scuzzy, slimy, oozy, therefore,
Many! *Traditional Cinquain 1st line - 1 word, 2nd line - 2 words, 3rd line - 3 words, 4th line - 4 words, 5th line - 1 word 2-4-6-8-2 Syllables First line - title, last line - connects title.

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Date: 5/21/2019 8:10:00 PM
This one gives me the critter-jitters! LOL. Aloha, gw
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Hilo Poet
Date: 5/21/2019 9:00:00 PM
Ha, thanks GW, Aloha wk
Date: 5/20/2019 12:49:00 PM
i saw on TV, some of the nasty things in Hawaii. Good Cinquain! Greetings from Wine Country! Panagiota
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Date: 5/20/2019 12:53:00 PM
No place to hide, thanks Panagiota, Aloha wk
Date: 5/20/2019 12:20:00 PM
And I’m outta here...lol
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Date: 5/20/2019 12:24:00 PM
Hence, exits hair-raising nightmare, Aloha wk

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