Critics

First a simple lunch –
soup, salad, rolls and dessert
(and wine if we choose).
Then the book.*
 
We become critics when we read.
That's half the fun of it.
The other half is the pleasure of the word.
Prose can be poetry.

Our preferences are as diverse as our personalities.
What I like, you don't, and vice versa.
No book appeals to everyone,
just as no work of art is universally appreciated.	

This particular book drew various reactions –
first "enjoyment" and then disappointment.
We agreed that the images were vivid
and the metaphors enlightening,	
but the story dragged a bit.

The tragedy's resolution, 
arriving at the tale's end, was anticlimactic .
Why had the author waited so long
to get the accused off the hook.

The ample evidence could have been revealed sooner, much sooner,
saving us from suffering endless descriptive passages.	
Clearly, dangling was the writer's intent.
No one appreciated being dangled.

We wanted the case resolved posthaste,
with fewer stalling tactics.
"Get on with it,"
seemed the general opinion.

Critics should be aware 
(alas, we sometimes are not),	
criticism is infinitely easier than creation.
Creation is inspiration 
mixed with plain hard work.

Authors, like all artists,
have their way with us.		
We're simply along for the ride. 
As critics we agreed –
a fine journey: long and well worth it.  


"Snow Falling on Cedars" by David Guterson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Andresen Avatar
June 14, 2015 at 2:55 PM
- Welcome to P -Soup, Gay :) - A poem that warms your heart or relieve your pain ... share your own poems here with us - Write poems and send it out into the world, I see you have already posted several poems - Enjoy a place with many different "poets" - // Anne-Lise :)
Christian Avatar
June 8, 2015 at 11:36 AM
A great write Welcome to poetry soup
Stuntzner Avatar
June 8, 2015 at 7:33 PM
Thank you, Diane. Appreciate your kind words. Gay
A   Avatar
June 7, 2015 at 11:44 PM
Hello Gay, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Stuntzner Avatar
June 8, 2015 at 7:35 PM
Linda, it's good know this is such a supportive group. I'm looking forward to our exchange. Gay
A  Avatar
June 7, 2015 at 11:09 PM
Gay S.,, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
Stuntzner Avatar
June 8, 2015 at 7:37 PM
My, oh my, such welcoming words. Many thanks! This is going to be a fine experience -- I feel it in my bones. Gay
Jaye Avatar
June 7, 2015 at 7:51 PM
Hello Gay I enjoyed reading your work entitled Critics. You are right critics just like authors, song writers, as well as singers have they way with us. I look forward to reading much more of your work Patricia.
Stuntzner Avatar
June 8, 2015 at 7:40 PM
Patricia, I'm more familiar with art critics than critics of other art forms. Their criticism is often disappointing. Sometimes it's devastating to the artist. Gay
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