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A poets dream, she'll seduce with her eyes, pens will desire to praise her charming guise, but be cautious, she'll treat you like her book, explore each chapter with her detailed look. Drain your ink, smoking pages in to fire, drink your spirit like blood thirsty vampire. But now it seems she may have met her match, a poet who's heart, she's struggling to snatch. He holds scriptures, she's never read before, each musing, leaves her yearning to feel more. A heart breaker, who gives no man a chance, dream maker, who leaves women in a trance. A modern day Samson and Delilah - spiritual soulmate who could tame her. Silent One 20 October 2020

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Paghunda Zahid

Date: 10/27/2020 6:38:00 AM

Awesome!!

Silent One
Date: 10/29/2020 10:40:00 AM

Thank you..

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 10/26/2020 6:14:00 PM

Marvellous, “a poet who's heart, she's struggling to snatch” love that line, who wouldn’t want to snatch a lover with a poetic heart. Every line’s wonderful, a superb write. . . Belle

Silent One
Date: 10/29/2020 10:40:00 AM

Thank you..

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/23/2020 11:01:00 AM

Everyone needs a spiritual soulmate and quite correctly explained below, opposites normally attract far more, than having too much in common. Once again, your sincere, truthful heart comes to the fore and your last two lines I love - they summarize your poem perfectly. Blessings and hugs my friend, Jennifer.

Silent One
Date: 10/24/2020 12:47:00 PM

Thank you Jennifer..

Jabbes Banda

Date: 10/22/2020 4:00:00 PM

Lovely!

Silent One
Date: 10/24/2020 12:47:00 PM

Thank you..

Peter Dome

Date: 10/21/2020 5:30:00 AM

Excellent writing. So eloquent and well constructed. If you have a book, I'd love to read. you are so inspiring. Well done.

Silent One
Date: 10/21/2020 9:58:00 AM

I've only been in one book and that's was because it was for charity... I've no desire to be published, but thank you for your kind words.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 10/20/2020 8:30:00 PM

Beautiful sonnet. It's a fave. Thanks for sharing this marvelous poem. :)

Silent One
Date: 10/21/2020 9:57:00 AM

Thank you...

Brandy Nicole

Date: 10/20/2020 8:25:00 PM

"She'll seduce with her eyes" Well. "Who could tame her ?" It sounds like he can, because he "leaves women in a trance" Once again, your muse has created a Masterpiece. ~ Brandy

Silent One
Date: 10/21/2020 9:57:00 AM

Indeed he can and in sure he would... Everyone gets tamed after a while... Thank you

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/20/2020 2:59:00 PM

Ah, sounds like two powerful souls here dear friend. They appear to have alot in common, including karmic attraction, nicely written S.O

Silent One
Date: 10/21/2020 9:56:00 AM

They are actual opposites, but opposites attract... Thank you

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/20/2020 2:46:00 PM

Heart-Breaker and Dream-maker quite a match.Somehow this story reminds me of The Taming Of The Shrew..I enjoyed reading it... I loved the way this poet knows how to tackle this woman ,which can easily drink each man'spirit. You describe this woman as very powerful..but the poet is as powerful as her when it comes to soul. Intriguing...Loved it.

Silent One
Date: 10/21/2020 9:54:00 AM

I've never seen nor read taming of the shrew... The woman is a heartbreaker but the man is a dream maker, so she has met her match... thank you

Janice Canerdy

Date: 10/20/2020 10:59:00 AM

Excellent sonnet, S.O. Janice

Silent One
Date: 10/20/2020 11:50:00 AM

Thank you

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/20/2020 8:25:00 AM

Pity they both had to die. Quite interesting poem. ~~

Silent One
Date: 10/20/2020 9:17:00 AM

Yes it was, but its just a story I guess... The idea of Samson and Delilah came at the end, was not the inspiration in writing this.. Thanks..

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/20/2020 7:50:00 AM

You've brought the story of Samson and Delilah to life in this wonderful sonnet S. O. Tom

Silent One
Date: 10/20/2020 9:17:00 AM

Thank you, but that was a comparison to the situation of these two individuals, not really bringing their story to life..

Angela Crabtree

Date: 10/20/2020 7:36:00 AM

By far, another great write! You are very creative, Silent One. I like the way you combine either the perfect picture or video to go with all of your poetry. Saved to my wall of favorites to read again. Have a great day :)

Silent One
Date: 10/20/2020 9:18:00 AM

The picture and the music always come after.. I do have a strong connection with music and sometimes it helps me to write... Thank you..

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/20/2020 6:22:00 AM

Liaison....always a source of inspiration for artists and painters. ......A poets dream, she'll seduce with her eyes, pens will desire to praise her charming guise...well said...it gets better from here.

Silent One
Date: 10/20/2020 6:40:00 AM

Thank you Vijay...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/20/2020 5:45:00 AM

- Really inspired by Samson and Delilah's ancient story ... another wonderful poem, S.O. .... love it :) - Have a lovely day ... here rain non-stop :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One
Date: 10/20/2020 5:52:00 AM

Thank you, glad you liked it... At first I was writing the sonnet, then I the idea of Samson and Delilah popped into my head... lol

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/20/2020 5:43:00 AM

Ooh...a fave! Love this and the painting too!

Silent One
Date: 10/20/2020 5:51:00 AM

Thank you Kim... Wrote this one so quickly, glad you liked it..

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/20/2020 5:05:00 AM

This is truly a poet's dream poem! It is on fire with passion that promises to awaken inspirations that will enchant and enlighten, bring the heart to hope and healing, bring the spirit to a sense of sensitivity that is revealing the very soul. This is a treasure that I AM most definitely faving. LOVE IT dear friend,... Your pen is alive and igniting a fire in it's wake. God bless you with inspirations like this always :) Love to you

Silent One
Date: 10/20/2020 5:50:00 AM

Thank you so much, I did say, I was not going to write, but muse keeps inspiring me... This one was really tongue in cheek, surprised has been liked so much lol