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Critical Comparison

I once had a boyfriend who Liked to make out Whilst listening to Critical thinking podcasts. . I would listen to the gentle smacking Of his lips against mine And he would move to the strange rhythm of the debates. I would feel his brow furrow as he whispered ‘Masked man fallacy’ in the crook of my neck and We would curl into each other’s laughter. I thought it was so hot. . I had no idea I’d find someone who Was turned on by the near silence Who needed nothing but The sounds of his hands sliding up my thighs And the feeling of Breaths leaving our noses And warming each other’s top lips.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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