Critic

Critic

Critic critic millions of book
How much critic on a single work u look
Its difficult to count down all
Why not work your own
You try and do it whole
What else may rise or fall
Introduce your feeling with word
Haven’t you get call from your heart
The style on that your pen can dance
To sing your notebook, give a chance
The magic with word combination
Will lead you every destination
Don’t you think and try
The emotions and cry
The happiness and joy
Your feeling and the
Story of your life to touch 
The beautiful heart of people 
And the beautiful world

      Ashumit k.v.
          9/11/2016

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