Crisscrossing

by Michael J Falotico


                                                  wiggling toes touch..
                                          ankles crisscross and hug tight..
                                                thighs cover and melt..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 6/13/2011 7:24:00 AM
This is beautiful without being vulgar..
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Date: 5/1/2011 8:43:00 AM
Very sensual , Michael, am not surprised.
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Date: 5/1/2011 7:04:00 AM
BINGO! fireworkds and skyrockets take off Michael.. such a romantic and sensuous creation luv.. if I show this one to Ron to read we won't get anything done today and we are still house hunting for my son Anthony.. oh... making this one a new fav for sure luv.. my W.K. has hypnotized his Jersey Girl once again in passion mode luv.. forever and always...
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Date: 4/30/2011 9:45:00 PM
Hello, Micahel! yes.. like Andrea says....oooo! la la.... what else can i say..p.d.
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Date: 4/30/2011 4:44:00 PM
ooh la la, michael, that is all I can say!!!
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Date: 4/30/2011 11:27:00 AM
I'm smiling at this delightful piece, Michael. Thanks for reading my poem and the lovely comments. You and Rossana enjoy this beautiful weekend! Love, Annalise
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Date: 4/30/2011 10:58:00 AM
I need to test this one to see if it really works Michael.. It is a little cold in Cape Town lol ;) Enjoyed this write of yours, love Wilma
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Date: 4/30/2011 7:30:00 AM
It certainly warmed me up. Beautiful Michael.
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Date: 4/30/2011 7:05:00 AM
I figured I would warm everyone's weekend up a bit....enjoy my Soup Family Friends... Luv Michael
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