Crisscrossing

by Michael J Falotico


                                                  wiggling toes touch..
                                          ankles crisscross and hug tight..
                                                thighs cover and melt..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Minardi Avatar
June 13, 2011 at 7:24 AM
This is beautiful without being vulgar..
Mehta Avatar
May 1, 2011 at 8:43 AM
Very sensual , Michael, am not surprised.
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May 1, 2011 at 7:04 AM
BINGO! fireworkds and skyrockets take off Michael.. such a romantic and sensuous creation luv.. if I show this one to Ron to read we won't get anything done today and we are still house hunting for my son Anthony.. oh... making this one a new fav for sure luv.. my W.K. has hypnotized his Jersey Girl once again in passion mode luv.. forever and always...
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April 30, 2011 at 9:45 PM
Hello, Micahel! yes.. like Andrea says....oooo! la la.... what else can i say..p.d.
Dietrich Avatar
April 30, 2011 at 4:44 PM
ooh la la, michael, that is all I can say!!!
Haick Avatar
April 30, 2011 at 11:27 AM
I'm smiling at this delightful piece, Michael. Thanks for reading my poem and the lovely comments. You and Rossana enjoy this beautiful weekend! Love, Annalise
Neels Avatar
April 30, 2011 at 10:58 AM
I need to test this one to see if it really works Michael.. It is a little cold in Cape Town lol ;) Enjoyed this write of yours, love Wilma
Mannan Avatar
April 30, 2011 at 7:30 AM
It certainly warmed me up. Beautiful Michael.
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April 30, 2011 at 7:05 AM
I figured I would warm everyone's weekend up a bit....enjoy my Soup Family Friends... Luv Michael
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