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poem submitted to this week's "Complete the Haigu," August 16, 2026.

Criss Cross

fields cross like gentle paths of thought~ the mountain waiting, the sky held open offering its blessing.
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Maverick Avatar
August 17, 2026 at 11:37 PM
As a counterpoint Sara let me tell you this ' mad dan andrews ' in 22? Passed these bylaws in Victoria Aus if a contractor spilled fuel oil while working no matter how little! If it became known there was to be a $1.500 fine if you by mistake, stepped off of a path in any municipal property and ' bruised grass' $1.000 fine this is the pagan god madness in full flight..I don't know if the Laws got repealled.? Or are still in force? Then you get Stanley Myers look at the reward he got ( and the greenest credential s of all !)
Goldsmith Avatar
August 17, 2026 at 12:14 PM
What a wonderful write/picture you have here. Love This... "Good Luck" Have a lovely day writing away............
Rodgers Avatar
August 17, 2026 at 9:28 AM
Dear Sara, I love that it’s brief, deeply serene, and leaves a wide, peaceful room for me to take a breath. Beautiful work, Sara. Blessings, Daniel
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