Dr. Upma A. Sharma Poet Monoku

Crispy Leaves

Crispy leaves





Trees shed reds, browns and golden -
                            
                              Coloured layers of a cake.




Written December 1st, 2014
For One broken Monoku contest by Rick Parise

Awarded 1st place

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Archana Garg December 30, 2014 at 6:07 AM Dr. Upma, you baked a beautiful cake. Well done, my dear.

Sara Kendrick December 29, 2014 at 4:49 PM Way to go with this great winning work..Congrats..Sara

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty December 29, 2014 at 2:31 AM crispy, tasty to poetic bud. Love Upma, Congrats. Best wishes for 2015.--rajat

Poet Destroyer A December 28, 2014 at 9:00 AM DR UPMA, CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WINNING POEM... interesting Broken Monoku.... Have a sweet day ~LINDA~

Kayod5 Kayode December 27, 2014 at 9:22 PM Congrats on the win Upma...huggs

Andrea Dietrich December 27, 2014 at 9:20 PM a crispy cake!!! Cool win, sweetie. Congratulations!

Maurice Yvonne December 27, 2014 at 7:23 PM Congratulations on your first place win!

Maurice Yvonne December 27, 2014 at 7:22 PM I love this monoku, A Fav!

Sandra Haight December 27, 2014 at 7:14 PM Nice image, Dr. Sharma! Congratulations on your win! Sandra

Jan Allison December 27, 2014 at 5:52 PM Back to say many congrats on your win Dr Sharma:-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus December 27, 2014 at 4:19 PM Congrats on your top placing, Upma! Ending the year in style:) // paul

Robert Stoner Jr December 27, 2014 at 3:38 PM congratulations on this win Dr S

Sara Kendrick December 2, 2014 at 6:23 AM Reads like a winner ..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Brenda Meier-Hans December 1, 2014 at 3:57 PM Delicious. I love layered cake. Great idea Dr. Sharma.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders December 1, 2014 at 3:29 PM Tasty image, Dr Upma! You are wonderful at these short forms...hugs, Rhonda

Eileen Manassian December 1, 2014 at 2:14 PM :) YUMMY! You are as sweet as that cake, Dr Upma! Good luck in the contest. Hugs

Pandita Sietesantos December 1, 2014 at 12:29 PM Lovely with dazzling imagery! Excellent Monoku! GL in the contest! Pandita

Jan Allison December 1, 2014 at 11:40 AM Beautifully penned - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan x