Nette Onclaud Poet Haiku

Crisp Wind Dips Low

crisp wind dips low…
     trembling on hammock 
  of rosette sky

     along vast dome…
  feathery air ripples
        like scalloped leaves

 winged azure glints…
     lifting tufted veil
 in autumn’s dance




SKAT's Contest: October Sky
8/25/2015

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Paul Callus September 2, 2015 at 11:56 AM This is a captivating string of haiku, Nette! Love the rosette sky, the feathery air ripples and autumn's dance. ~ Congratulations on a deserved win! Hugs // paul

Skat A September 2, 2015 at 12:01 AM Nette, thank you for the October Sky (three headed haiku) WIN.... SKAT

Pandita Sietesantos August 31, 2015 at 7:21 PM Nette, this is such a lovely set of haiku with oh so amazing imagery - "trembling on hammock of rosette sky.." just left me tingling with pleasure ! Congratulations on your wonderful win! Pandita

Eve Roper August 31, 2015 at 5:59 PM Wonderful write a 7 and congratulations on your win. Hugs, Eve

James Inman August 31, 2015 at 8:53 AM Really beautiful imagery. Wonderful.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 31, 2015 at 4:50 AM Wonderful string of haikus nette, lovely imagery! Perfect to the pic, Congrats on big win!

Alexis Y. August 30, 2015 at 10:35 PM Nette, this is beautiful! Congratulations on your awesome win:-)Alexis

Andrea Dietrich August 27, 2015 at 10:38 PM wow, Nette. this is amazing!! One of the best sets I have seen! I love it.

David Mohn August 25, 2015 at 9:37 PM eloquently imagined Nette...chills indeed!

James Peranteau August 25, 2015 at 8:03 PM I had like a hundred word's to adulate this write dear poet...there's no need....................((((((claps)))))) I LOVED this Nette ! Have a fantastic week of inspiration...of course to mine faves young lady!...much love, james

Anne-Lise Andresen August 25, 2015 at 2:14 PM - This is really beautiful, dear friend Nette :) - I wish you good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick August 25, 2015 at 9:01 AM Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..That hammock of rosette sky must be beautiful..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Demetrios Trifiatis August 25, 2015 at 4:47 AM Pearls of Haiku, dear nette! Good luck.

Charlotte Puddifoot August 25, 2015 at 4:19 AM a beautiful haiku set for the contest, it should do very well; i particularly like the second and third ones, very visual :)

Jan Allison August 25, 2015 at 3:34 AM Very beautiful string of haiku Nette good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Franco Gonza August 25, 2015 at 1:56 AM This is a fantastic haiku, perfect ending with that dancing moment. I did not expect that! You are one big surprise!