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Crisp Wind Dips Low

crisp wind dips low… trembling on hammock of rosette sky along vast dome… feathery air ripples like scalloped leaves winged azure glints… lifting tufted veil in autumn’s dance SKAT's Contest: October Sky 8/25/2015

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Paul Callus

Date: 9/2/2015 11:56:00 AM

This is a captivating string of haiku, Nette! Love the rosette sky, the feathery air ripples and autumn's dance. ~ Congratulations on a deserved win! Hugs // paul

Skat A

Date: 9/2/2015 12:01:00 AM

Nette, thank you for the October Sky (three headed haiku) WIN.... SKAT

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/31/2015 7:21:00 PM

Nette, this is such a lovely set of haiku with oh so amazing imagery - "trembling on hammock of rosette sky.." just left me tingling with pleasure ! Congratulations on your wonderful win! Pandita

Eve Roper

Date: 8/31/2015 5:59:00 PM

Wonderful write a 7 and congratulations on your win. Hugs, Eve

James Inman

Date: 8/31/2015 8:53:00 AM

Really beautiful imagery. Wonderful.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/31/2015 4:50:00 AM

Wonderful string of haikus nette, lovely imagery! Perfect to the pic, Congrats on big win!

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/30/2015 10:35:00 PM

Nette, this is beautiful! Congratulations on your awesome win:-)Alexis

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/27/2015 10:38:00 PM

wow, Nette. this is amazing!! One of the best sets I have seen! I love it.

David Mohn

Date: 8/25/2015 9:37:00 PM

eloquently imagined Nette...chills indeed!

James Peranteau

Date: 8/25/2015 8:03:00 PM

I had like a hundred word's to adulate this write dear poet...there's no need....................((((((claps)))))) I LOVED this Nette ! Have a fantastic week of inspiration...of course to mine faves young lady!...much love, james