Crimson Tears

a gentle kiss
upon the soft
velvet folds
of a lone rose
enslaved
in its bed of thorns
i am enraptured
by its beauty

my lips long
for the warmth
of lips pressed
against a child's head
beneath soft whispers
of a mother's love
yet it can't subsist
in memories
where it never
existed

i see the tangles
of vines
grown from seeds
dirtied beyond the roots
that were the stem
of survival

i feel it struggle
to stand proud
in the storm's trails
endless  floods
of emotional depths

i feel it shiver
in the tempo
of wind's shift
where life meets death
beyond lip's cold press

i feel the needle
of its thorn
pierce me again
beneath crimson tears
i cry

a gentle kiss
upon the rose
as i place it
against the stone
that holds your name

i linger
in its beauty
beneath your shame
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Chiri Avatar
September 19, 2019 at 1:58 PM
Beautifully written my friend with a deep sadness! Amazing!;)
Adams Avatar
September 19, 2019 at 6:27 PM
Thank you my friend, i scribbled another quick little sensual post between the dark ones :) hugs
Wolf Avatar
September 19, 2019 at 1:52 PM
Incredibly emotive and evocative, Sandra: Every word, every line gripped me, as the rose cast a spell over me. Wondrous! ~ Gershon
Adams Avatar
September 19, 2019 at 6:26 PM
Thank you my friend...my muse has been all over the place this week...glad she could lure you in her depths...i had a happier toned one between the darker ones! :) hugs
Pandit Avatar
September 19, 2019 at 12:33 PM
Definitely chills and tears..a saddened write drenched in unhappy memories..tangles..struggles. You know how to reach the depths of emotions, Sandy.
Adams Avatar
September 19, 2019 at 1:01 PM
Thank you my friend glad to know you felt the depths of emotions :) hugs
Green Avatar
September 19, 2019 at 12:05 PM
Now I feel a tear forming in my eye, this was sad again my friend. Deeply felt emotions run through this exquisite piece of sorrowed writing. It is tinted a deep shade of gray, as the clouds that seem to follow your words to this page. Beautifully sad Sandy.
Adams Avatar
September 19, 2019 at 12:12 PM
Thank you my friend...the next one is happy...my muse is pulling in two directions these days as summer fades to colder days...bittersweet changes....no tears allowed though, deal? hugs :)
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