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Crimson River

Crimson River O Crimson river of Autumnal leaves! The snow dove leans into her lover’s eyes. He glides his fingers o’er her soul - she sighs. The paddles splash between seaweed that cleaves. Surrendered lips sure shiver — blue star skies. O Crimson river of Autumnal leaves. The snow dove leans into her lover’s eyes. The scented pines along the lake — chest heaves. Adoration of dusk to dawn time thieves. The lovers kiss the shore of deft goodbyes. O Crimson river of Autumnal leaves. The snow dove leans into her lover’s eyes. He glides his fingers o’er her soul - she sighs... 6/12/2018 Madrigal Poem

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Date: 6/13/2018 1:47:00 PM
Indeed, I agree, you have created such beautiful imagery, Kim Exquisite !!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/19/2018 6:52:00 AM
Thank you, Mike! <3
Date: 6/13/2018 7:18:00 AM
A beautiful poem..enjoyed reading this fantastic creation, Kim. The repeating line adds to the rhythm and beauty.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/13/2018 7:52:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay!
Date: 6/13/2018 4:44:00 AM
This was a well conceived write that was then.. masterfully composed. You carried the reader along, knowing that each line would pull them into your grip more and more. I loved this piece!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/13/2018 7:53:00 AM
Thank you, Chance!
Date: 6/13/2018 12:26:00 AM
Well written verse Kim, I have never heard of this form. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/13/2018 7:56:00 AM
Thank you, Tom!
Date: 6/12/2018 10:39:00 PM
Equisite write
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/13/2018 7:56:00 AM
Thanks so much, Eve! <3
Date: 6/12/2018 9:55:00 PM
A beautiful love song Kim...Well written
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/12/2018 9:58:00 PM
Thanks so much, Joseph!

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