Crimson River

Crimson River O Crimson river of Autumnal leaves! The snow dove leans into her lover’s eyes. He glides his fingers o’er her soul - she sighs. The paddles splash between seaweed that cleaves. Surrendered lips sure shiver — blue star skies. O Crimson river of Autumnal leaves. The snow dove leans into her lover’s eyes. The scented pines along the lake — chest heaves. Adoration of dusk to dawn time thieves. The lovers kiss the shore of deft goodbyes. O Crimson river of Autumnal leaves. The snow dove leans into her lover’s eyes. He glides his fingers o’er her soul - she sighs... 6/12/2018 Madrigal Poem
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Gentile Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 1:47 PM
Indeed, I agree, you have created such beautiful imagery, Kim Exquisite !!
Rodrigues Avatar
June 19, 2018 at 6:52 AM
Thank you, Mike! <3
Pandit Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 7:18 AM
A beautiful poem..enjoyed reading this fantastic creation, Kim. The repeating line adds to the rhythm and beauty.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 7:52 AM
Thank you, Vijay!
Man Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 4:44 AM
This was a well conceived write that was then.. masterfully composed. You carried the reader along, knowing that each line would pull them into your grip more and more. I loved this piece!
Rodrigues Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 7:53 AM
Thank you, Chance!
Cunningham Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 12:26 AM
Well written verse Kim, I have never heard of this form. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 7:56 AM
Thank you, Tom!
Roper Avatar
June 12, 2018 at 10:39 PM
Equisite write
Rodrigues Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 7:56 AM
Thanks so much, Eve! <3
May Avatar
June 12, 2018 at 9:55 PM
A beautiful love song Kim...Well written
Rodrigues Avatar
June 12, 2018 at 9:58 PM
Thanks so much, Joseph!
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