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CRIMSON ISLAND guavaberry punch a fly lands on straw’s rum drop warm breezes buzzing Kim Rodrigues © 2017

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Date: 5/5/2017 8:12:00 PM
oh that is really cute. I love the play on word buzzing!!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2017 10:09:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea :)
Date: 5/5/2017 7:01:00 PM
sweet haiku Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2017 10:10:00 PM
Thank you, Miraj
Date: 5/5/2017 3:52:00 PM
mmmm I can almost taste the punch Kim - lovely descriptive haiku:-) hugs Jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2017 4:07:00 PM
Thanks, Jan! Cheers!
Date: 5/5/2017 3:15:00 PM
And after a few more quavaberry punches, a lot more will be buzzing. :) This was fun Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2017 3:27:00 PM
:) Living the life! Cheers

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