Crimson Island

CRIMSON ISLAND guavaberry punch a fly lands on straw’s rum drop warm breezes buzzing Kim Rodrigues © 2017
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Dietrich Avatar
May 5, 2017 at 8:12 PM
oh that is really cute. I love the play on word buzzing!!!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 5, 2017 at 10:09 PM
Thank you, Andrea :)
Raha Avatar
May 5, 2017 at 7:01 PM
sweet haiku Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 5, 2017 at 10:10 PM
Thank you, Miraj
Allison Avatar
May 5, 2017 at 3:52 PM
mmmm I can almost taste the punch Kim - lovely descriptive haiku:-) hugs Jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
May 5, 2017 at 4:07 PM
Thanks, Jan! Cheers!
Green Avatar
May 5, 2017 at 3:15 PM
And after a few more quavaberry punches, a lot more will be buzzing. :) This was fun Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 5, 2017 at 3:27 PM
:) Living the life! Cheers
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