the following poem written based upon this image for online poetry class
Hibiscus opens petals flushed with morning heat cradling soft newborn light now Breeze lifts its edges whispering through crimson folds gentle as a prayer’s release Bees circle slowly drawn to its brief, burning bloom knowing beauty’s borrowed time
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