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Crimson Etchings

I hope to grace this page today 
With  musings from my soul
And write between the lines
The greatest story every told
In trails of crimson etchings 
Bleeding from an open heart
As line by line  my inhibitions
Simply fall apart

A spirit free from earthly bonds
Oblivious to  time
Whilst drifting through the annals
Of something so sublime
As daylight turns again to night
To break another dawn
As I and my muse 
Write... on and on and on

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/10/2016 8:55:00 PM
Illuminated by the muse as it reaches for greater heights...Nicely done...
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Elaine George
Date: 11/18/2016 3:40:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph. Elaine
Date: 11/9/2016 10:12:00 AM
Oh! this is beautiful, Elaine, and how smoothly it flows! I have this picture of you in my mind, writing to candlelight! #7 Regards // paul
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Elaine George
Date: 11/10/2016 7:38:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by, Paul and for your kind comments. Much appreciated! And Yes!, I actually on occasion, write by candlelight.
Date: 11/4/2016 7:21:00 PM
wow, Elaine this is gorgeous. I see it got a great win. Wish I knew in which contest. Was it one of Brian's. BIG congrats then . It was well deserved.
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Elaine George
Date: 11/5/2016 3:28:00 AM
Yes! One of Brian's. Thank you, Andrea. Lainey
Date: 11/4/2016 7:19:00 PM
Congratulations on this beautiful inspiring winning piece Lainey! 7 ; )
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Elaine George
Date: 11/5/2016 3:28:00 AM
Thank you Connie. Lainey
Date: 11/3/2016 6:44:00 PM
Elaine, your poem flows so well with a lovely rhythm as you graced this page with your beautiful 'crimson etchings'! Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Elaine George
Date: 11/3/2016 6:46:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by and for your kind comments, Sandra. Much appreciated. Lainey.
Date: 11/3/2016 1:03:00 PM
Wow, a great style in this well penned verse. Lovely flow and feeling. Congratulations on your win. A fav.
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Elaine George
Date: 11/3/2016 6:51:00 PM
Thank you so much for stopping by and for your kind comments, Janis. So much appreciated. Lainey
Date: 11/2/2016 12:12:00 AM
An awesome write, Elaine:) breathtakingly beautiful:) a 7:)
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Elaine George
Date: 11/2/2016 9:06:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by, Jo, and for your much appreciated comments. Lainey
Date: 11/1/2016 4:06:00 PM
Ah, you must be one of the "Midnight Writers," Lainey. Welcome to the club! You always "grace" pages with thought-provoking words from your heart, and this is no exception. So nice to hear from you again, Lainey. I hope you are doing well. You have a masterpiece of "crimson etchings" on your canvas today. Hugs, Carolyn
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Elaine George
Date: 11/1/2016 4:20:00 PM
Thank , you Carolyn. I have a new book out ... a collaboration of photography . Photographs of stone angels coupled with my poetic epic. You can have a preview of the book by going to the following link: darrencreightonphotography.com Then scroll down. You can also read the epic itself on poetry soup. Earthbound Angels Made of Stone posted on this site. bfn, Lainey
Date: 11/1/2016 3:11:00 PM
Loved this one, you write so well. The message alone in this was brilliant. really nicely penned.
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Elaine George
Date: 11/1/2016 3:16:00 PM
Thank you so much for stopping by, Chris and for your kind comments, they are much appreciated. Lainey

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