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A 23-syllable Suzette Prime; including a caesura.

Philosophical arc: The day contracts (loss, mortality) → memories reseed (continuity) → refection (restoration).

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crimping clouds


crimping clouds ripple in reflection      the day contracts as memories reseed in refection

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Andrea Dietrich

September 11, 2026 at 10:01 PM

Better yet, I will look it up at contest description

Suzette Richards

September 11, 2026 at 10:20 PM

The fastest path to a definition of Suzette Prime and an example of the prime numbers, is via "Definitions" here at PS. It is very straight forward, really - no fancy footwork or tricks in the design or my contest description.

Andrea Dietrich

September 11, 2026 at 9:58 PM

Ahhh refection is restoration. I didn't know that. Love the message and the amazing alliteration, Suzette. I think I need to find your old blogs on Suzette prime and try to do your contest sometime. I can't seem to remember new forms very well and I keep making typos with my cell phone. I wonder if it's a good sign of aging!

Suzette Richards

September 11, 2026 at 10:21 PM

Suzette Prime has been around since 2012, so hardly new. Thanks for the compliment regarding this one-liner, Andrea.

Dorothy Gibbons

August 30, 2026 at 9:03 PM

Love this Suzette powerful and meaningful. I love taking photographs 📸 that show reflection. They speak volumes to me and love clouds too. Love to gaze at clouds find so inspiring different pictures your eyes 👀 see.Love picture you choose your ink ✍️describes it perfectly.A pleasure to read at 5am in UK great start to my day 😀 have a great week hugzzz 🫂

Suzette Richards

August 30, 2026 at 11:56 PM

I miss the sunrises over the Yorkshire Moors. I worked there some time ago before returning to SA. Every sunrise and sunset hold a special chance at memories - as in my example poem, Verismo, at the Definition of Suzette Prime here at PoetrySoup.

Joanna Daniel

August 8, 2026 at 4:40 AM

This is very good, Suzette😊

Suzette Richards

August 30, 2026 at 11:56 PM

Thanks, Jo

Paige Hind

July 24, 2026 at 9:41 PM

different, it's more positive than some things I have written about reflections, beautiful, Suzette

Suzette Richards

July 25, 2026 at 12:59 AM

I have also been in a dark place until recently. I am trying to focus on the light ... Thank you for reading and your kind comment, Paige.

Alison A Smith nee Howarth

July 24, 2026 at 6:28 AM

Memories reseed in refection - why does everyone send me seeking my dictionary. This holds so much meaning in a few words.( doh and then I reread your notes)

Suzette Richards

July 24, 2026 at 8:15 AM

Someone once told me that he read my poems as he was sure to learn a new word everytime.

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