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Poetic Form: Lento
Inspired: 2024 February 08
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If I was gifted meant to be, drift o'er the waves a shining sea, shift the limbs and branched canopies, sift the brambles edged a lea. Might this time be of arrogance? Contrite that plagues inheritance, red light districts embarrass us, whites of stars shift in defiance. Be content in doing nothing, A prudent soul would try to sing, The student aimed degree missing, Impudent tongue when found will swing.

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Date: 2/8/2024 2:13:00 PM
thought provoking poem....I liked 'be content in doing nothing.'
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Date: 2/8/2024 2:50:00 PM
This LENTO was a trial run to my DOVE ODE, essentially, thought it'll be a run for SUZE contest--but since it was done, thought it should be given its light, anyways. THANKS, Sara, Aloha, William

Book: Shattered Sighs