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Crime Scene Investigation

Red substance on the floor Fleshy Spatter on the walls Dog ends in the ashtray Deceased Smoke pushing at the windows Glass lying on the table Splintered Contents dripping off the edge Photos torn in pieces Ruined Heads circling the bin Tissues in a line up Guilty Run into the bedroom Clothes missing from the wardrobe Stolen A single hanger left behind Corpse found in the bathroom Crying A hole in her left chest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/18/2009 11:31:00 AM
Oooh..macabre! I like it! Well crafted, Kat. Donna
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Date: 5/12/2009 10:31:00 AM
This is just excellent, a bloody scene you desribe very well Kat, CSI Miami is my fav , David Caruso rocks!! Thank you for your lovely and warm comments on my work, always appreciated.
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Date: 5/10/2009 6:02:00 AM
Would seem to be a cold and dispassionate crime scene, (though still poetic) but there's something more underneath. Well done
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Date: 5/6/2009 2:32:00 PM
Gruesome scene well described. Vince
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Date: 5/6/2009 5:37:00 AM
I love all the CSI sows on TV! ...never miss a one of 'em!! Cold, clinical and methodical... just like the CSIs... BRAVO Kat! Best wishes, Keith
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