Cries

Am battling myself Fighting my thoughts Trying to get things right Regretting my past Am on a depression Can't see the future Am doomed pending catastrophe Its too dark They is no sign of light The way is thorny And am on foot I can't take a step Am stack in the middle of Norway Am confused Am lost Will never be found again They is cries every where Am Zimbabwe And I will raise again

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Shadow Hamilton

Date: 8/3/2013 4:50:00 PM

nice poem congrats on feature Shadow x smiles

Danesh Morgan

Date: 7/30/2013 1:25:00 AM

beautiful, powerful, gripping, thank you

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/19/2013 1:54:00 PM

Hi Admire. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your pen is looking for. If you ever need or seek feedback on a certain poem, click on my name any time you like. I’m looking forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy this community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda

Skat A

Date: 6/19/2013 8:15:00 AM

Admire, wow... and the ending is great and rises with powerful thoughts... love the ending., Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/19/2013 5:19:00 AM

Hey! - Pleased to read your first poem in the P-Soup! - A moving poem. - You write very well. - Welcome to P-Soup, hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your thoughts and words here with us :) - Here it is: give to get, comments - then you will get feedback on your writing - I love get feedback on what I write. - Wish you luck my "new friend" - Have fun with poetry! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Kim Van Breda

Date: 6/18/2013 7:25:00 AM

The sad and tragic demise of a beautiful country depicted well in this poem. Welcome to P/Soup