Cried

I cried while you were gone.

       		          The        	t
                		          e
                		             a
               		                        r
               		                          s
                                                             	 they	 s t u n g       my cheeks.

       		         It left a trail, a crimson water

                   					                     in a pool of former me.
             And I wallowed in the thought

                                                                    that this is what it is.


     And no   m
                      a
                        t
                          t
                           e
                             r        where I find myself,

                                      The control 	     e v  a   d    e     s    		     my grip.
                                

And I try to fight
                      and fight
                                    and fight.
                                                                      I try to just forget.
                                  

                    The thoughts I find inside my head

               			                                     Are too hard to relive.
   
                               I refuse to be a slave,      
                                                                               to the pauper and the King.

                  			 I lay my weary head    d

                          					             o

                             				                     w
 
                    					                     n
           
          Not ashamed, but struggling.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Guzzi Avatar
November 15, 2012 at 5:58 PM
Strong feelings expressed well I particularly like how you ended. Light & Love
Kendrick Avatar
November 14, 2012 at 3:58 PM
Interesting work...Very good design on the page..It has great flow and rhythm to it..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Sara
Dawson Avatar
November 14, 2012 at 5:23 PM
Thank you so much for taking time to read my pieces and give me your feedback, Sara. It really makes me feel welcomed being a "newbie" on here.
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