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Cricket Serenade

Windowsill love song,
The mariachi crickets:
Serenade the night.

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Lesley Grimshaw

Date: 10/3/2009 9:10:00 AM

I can hear the night music in this haiku Raul, you have given this haiku a great vibrancy, I have been taken on a journey by reading this.

Adell Foster

Date: 9/27/2009 2:34:00 AM

The visuals of this piece are awesome, one could almost hear the night serenade of your talented mariachi crickets. Excellent figurative language. It is indeed a pleasure to have read such a fine haiku. I thank you Raul for sharing the read and for reading 'The Mulberry Tree' I truly appreciate it. God Bless, Always, Adell

Ismael Nieves

Date: 9/26/2009 10:38:00 PM

very IMPRESSIVE bro! I must admitt that I was thinking of writing one of those crickets haiku yesterday, but no rush anymore cause you just hit the spot dude. I guess we were on the same page. All I have to say is FLAWLESS!

Gert W. Knop

Date: 9/26/2009 12:00:00 PM

Nicely written Haiku, Raul! I still hear the crickets from the past in the highlands. ...Gert

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 9/26/2009 10:41:00 AM

Lovely I hear them singing now! Laura :)

Savannah Rose Harper

Date: 9/25/2009 12:14:00 PM

i love the mariachi crickets thing i can see their trumpets and sombreros love thiis write

Christopher Higgins

Date: 9/25/2009 7:48:00 AM

The second line is a winner....I can see them with big hats and oversized guitars...love this.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/25/2009 6:09:00 AM

Awesome write Raul. Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 9/24/2009 7:36:00 PM

Having been the outdoor type, in my younger days, I relate very close to this Haiku. Enjoyed it very much, Sincerely Moses

James Marshall Goff

Date: 9/24/2009 6:43:00 PM

much fun! Raul!...line 2 is my fav!... jim

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/24/2009 4:43:00 PM

those crickets can get loud when you can't sleep, though I love the night calls.

Marcus Crane

Date: 9/24/2009 2:47:00 PM

great one raul .. the sound of the cricket is beautiful at night .. so relaxing and joyful .. i can enjoy these serenades when i need to be alone to set my mind right .. love this one . Marco

P Sheart

Date: 9/24/2009 2:45:00 PM

Hi Raul A beautiful serenade it is too! I can hear them..Well, here in Alaska we don't have crickets but...I still here them ha! A wonderful Haiku. Many blessings to you and yours. Take care, Love Light Truth Patricia