Cricket Serenade

I can hear the night music in this haiku Raul, you have given this haiku a great vibrancy, I have been taken on a journey by reading this.

The visuals of this piece are awesome, one could almost hear the night serenade of your talented mariachi crickets. Excellent figurative language. It is indeed a pleasure to have read such a fine haiku. I thank you Raul for sharing the read and for reading 'The Mulberry Tree' I truly appreciate it. God Bless, Always, Adell

very IMPRESSIVE bro! I must admitt that I was thinking of writing one of those crickets haiku yesterday, but no rush anymore cause you just hit the spot dude. I guess we were on the same page. All I have to say is FLAWLESS!

Nicely written Haiku, Raul! I still hear the crickets from the past in the highlands. ...Gert

Lovely I hear them singing now! Laura :)

i love the mariachi crickets thing i can see their trumpets and sombreros love thiis write

The second line is a winner....I can see them with big hats and oversized guitars...love this.

Awesome write Raul. Love, Carol

Having been the outdoor type, in my younger days, I relate very close to this Haiku. Enjoyed it very much, Sincerely Moses

much fun! Raul!...line 2 is my fav!... jim

those crickets can get loud when you can't sleep, though I love the night calls.

great one raul .. the sound of the cricket is beautiful at night .. so relaxing and joyful .. i can enjoy these serenades when i need to be alone to set my mind right .. love this one . Marco

Hi Raul A beautiful serenade it is too! I can hear them..Well, here in Alaska we don't have crickets but...I still here them ha! A wonderful Haiku. Many blessings to you and yours. Take care, Love Light Truth Patricia

Wonderful poem Raul, i would love to hear the sounds of the crickets, maybe one day>>James

Nicely done Haiku, Raul. Keep writing. Sara

Awesome! And thanks for your comments! Hugs, Robin

and you amuse me too with this crickety sound-Charma