Crestfallen Angel

My crestfallen angel, I see your soul cry. I see you live in darkness, waiting and praying to die.
 
Your deep souls complexion, and the burden you bear.  Scream to me so silent. A feeling so rare.
 
You wonder out, to not be seen. You can run and run, but can't hide it from me.

 I feel your confinement.  I know its unjust.  You are my diamond just cover in dust.

My slow slipping sweet heart, I know you heart aches. But you cant be disillusioned, I can't see you break.

You brought me from darkness. Made me content.  But when I try to break your walls, i don't make a dent.

Your holy and majestic, but your losing your grip.   If I end up losing you. I can't forgive and forget.

Your all that I long for, the reason I wake.  Choosing to take your life, is  a nonprofit mistake.

Destroy the one who built you. You'll leave us in despair.  Pushing us all way
Is what's really unfair.

My dying delicate, most special delight.  I love you  for a reason, you brighten my night.

I can't let you go, I won't let you demise. You need to realize, for you MY souls cries.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 7/26/2015 1:31:00 AM
when one soul cries for another... it's destiny, such a deep write enjoyed S.K.A.T.
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Date: 7/24/2015 4:58:00 PM
I liked your poem. Thank you for sharing. I feel a lot of pain coming from it.
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Scott Thompson
Date: 7/24/2015 5:23:00 PM
Yeah, its been my style for years now. Ever since I started writing.
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