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Cresent Moon

cresent moon cradles a dark heavy pregnancy... almost touching earth
The moon on Wednesday night was crescent shaped on the very bottom next to the earth and it seemed like the moon was nearly touching the earth.
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Horne Avatar
January 29, 2015 at 4:19 PM
love this moonlight porch inspiration - love the pregnancy description
Kiser Avatar
January 26, 2015 at 3:14 PM
That's beautiful imagery!
Dietrich Avatar
January 23, 2015 at 5:20 PM
cool little story you put with your poem, Sara. That makes it all the more interesting to me.
Fraser Avatar
January 23, 2015 at 1:35 PM
Stunning Haiku Sara. You've created a gem here girl, James :)x
Hamilton Avatar
January 23, 2015 at 12:35 PM
such imagery Sara it is lovely to see the moon when she seems touchable great pen hugs 7
Chakrabarty Avatar
January 23, 2015 at 9:45 AM
a poem par excellence Sara. Favved it. God bless>>rajat
Sirak Avatar
January 23, 2015 at 9:08 AM
Stunning! You amaze me with the images you can evoke with just a few words.
Pinet Avatar
January 23, 2015 at 8:22 AM
This is a hauntingly beautiful poem that poetically draws on the allure of moon. Emile #7
Meade Avatar
January 23, 2015 at 7:52 AM
Nicely done my dear Sara, the waxing moon kissing the horizon . . . moon love. Loved your haiku. 7
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January 23, 2015 at 7:47 AM
Tantalizing....Jehovah's creations ! *smiles* Fantastic visual Sara ! Have a blessed day dear poet.....much love, james
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