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cresent moon cradles a dark heavy pregnancy... almost touching earth
The moon on Wednesday night was crescent shaped on the very bottom next to the earth and it seemed like the moon was nearly touching the earth.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Date: 1/29/2015 4:19:00 PM
love this moonlight porch inspiration - love the pregnancy description
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Date: 1/26/2015 3:14:00 PM
That's beautiful imagery!
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Date: 1/23/2015 5:20:00 PM
cool little story you put with your poem, Sara. That makes it all the more interesting to me.
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Date: 1/23/2015 1:35:00 PM
Stunning Haiku Sara. You've created a gem here girl, James :)x
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Date: 1/23/2015 12:35:00 PM
such imagery Sara it is lovely to see the moon when she seems touchable great pen hugs 7
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Date: 1/23/2015 9:45:00 AM
a poem par excellence Sara. Favved it. God bless>>rajat
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Date: 1/23/2015 9:08:00 AM
Stunning! You amaze me with the images you can evoke with just a few words.
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Date: 1/23/2015 8:22:00 AM
This is a hauntingly beautiful poem that poetically draws on the allure of moon. Emile #7
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Date: 1/23/2015 7:52:00 AM
Nicely done my dear Sara, the waxing moon kissing the horizon . . . moon love. Loved your haiku. 7
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Date: 1/23/2015 7:47:00 AM
Tantalizing....Jehovah's creations ! *smiles* Fantastic visual Sara ! Have a blessed day dear poet.....much love, james
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