Home » Poems » Len Gasun » Crescent Moon

Len Gasun | + Follow Poet |

Crescent Moon

Poet's Notes

(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Len Gasun.

?????????????????????? picture of crescent moon and star

C is for Crescent moon Cuddling me so sweet Climb its ends Climb with me. Caress me, babe Cast spell on me. Cross my heart Consume all parts. Cry no more, dear Chrystal light cheers Capture its beauty Crown of night sea Choice of bright stars Conductor of their choir Concert at dark sky Curved fluorescent light. Come, look with delight Call lovers to view its sight. Cloak a nightmare ‘til no more Clear lantern up there. Catch it if like falling pea Crescent moon is C 12/29/2016 8.55pm ©2016Leonora Galinta All Rights Reserved -experimenting a different kind of concrete :)

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Debbie Duncan

Date: 5/23/2017 12:31:00 AM

Awesome made me smile with your crescent moon, love it :) 7

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/3/2017 3:47:00 PM

Ahh!! Enjoyed the design and the thoughts..These are not so easy to do however yours is excellent..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Len Gasun
Date: 1/8/2017 6:39:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend, Sara for enjoying my experimental poem, your kind visit and your wonderful and encouraging comments. So much appreciated. Hugs! So sorry for my late expression of gratitude 'coz I just read your comment now. I was so busy with a started project/assignment at school but I promise to come back and visit you again and other poets as soon as I'm done with it. Always my pleasure to read your work too, so you're much welcome my dear friend. God bless you! Many hugs from me!

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 1/3/2017 6:35:00 AM

This is a great concrete crescent moon poem Galeo; good luck in the contest!:)

Len Gasun
Date: 1/8/2017 6:33:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend, Cheryl. So sorry for coming back to you late to thank you coz I was busy with a started project/assignment at school. But, I'll be back to visit you and others here soon as I'm done with those assigned tasks. Again, thank you so much and Good Luck as well. Many Hugs from me to you!

Supraja Kannan

Date: 12/30/2016 12:04:00 AM

WOW...This is so beautiful... Really a great one... Reads like a winner...A big 7 for this cute crescent moon...

Len Gasun
Date: 12/30/2016 11:21:00 PM

Thank you so much my dear SK. I appreciate so much your lovely comment the big 7 and your kind visit. Hugs!

Tim Smith

Date: 12/29/2016 8:21:00 AM

Great Leonora...Love the shape you created...I am in love with the moon and your poem shines

Len Gasun
Date: 12/30/2016 11:20:00 PM

Thank you so much my dear friend, Tim! Hugs!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/29/2016 8:04:00 AM

Nice one, Galeo!

Len Gasun
Date: 12/30/2016 11:08:00 PM

Thank you so much my dear Kim! Your visit and comment is very much appreciated. Hugs!

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/29/2016 7:51:00 AM

Very cool! Well done. :)

Len Gasun
Date: 12/29/2016 8:01:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend, Heidi. Advance Happy New Year! Hugs!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/29/2016 7:51:00 AM

- Beautiful poems, dear Leonora :) - Thanks for the year 2016 ... looking forward to a new year with new poems and friendship :) - Best wishes for a happy new year my friend - Love and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun
Date: 12/29/2016 7:59:00 AM

Thank you so much for the prompt read and comment on my poem my dear friend, Anne Lise. I dearly appreciate it. Thanks for the year 2016, too, your kindness, friendship and everything. I look forward too my dear. Best wishes and Advance Happy New Year! Many hugs from me to you!