Len Gasun Poet Concrete

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Crescent Moon

C is for
                                                    Crescent moon
                                      Cuddling me so sweet
                                  Climb its ends
                          Climb with me.
                     Caress me, babe 
                 Cast spell on me.
              Cross my heart
         Consume all parts.
        Cry no more, dear                         
    Chrystal light cheers
     Capture its beauty 
      Crown of night sea                          
      Choice of bright stars
       Conductor of their choir
              Concert at dark sky
                Curved fluorescent light.
                  Come, look with delight
                         Call lovers to view its sight.       
                               Cloak a nightmare ‘til no more                
                                             Clear lantern up there.
                                                     Catch it if like falling pea
                                                                   Crescent moon is C


                              12/29/2016  8.55pm
©2016Leonora Galinta
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-experimenting a different kind of concrete :)

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Debbie Duncan May 23, 2017 at 12:31 AM Awesome made me smile with your crescent moon, love it :) 7

Sara Kendrick January 3, 2017 at 3:47 PM Ahh!! Enjoyed the design and the thoughts..These are not so easy to do however yours is excellent..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Len Gasun January 8, 2017 at 6:39 AM Thank you so much my dear friend, Sara for enjoying my experimental poem, your kind visit and your wonderful and encouraging comments. So much appreciated. Hugs! So sorry for my late expression of gratitude 'coz I just read your comment now. I was so busy with a started project/assignment at school but I promise to come back and visit you again and other poets as soon as I'm done with it. Always my pleasure to read your work too, so you're much welcome my dear friend. God bless you! Many hugs from me!

Cheryl Hoffman January 3, 2017 at 6:35 AM This is a great concrete crescent moon poem Galeo; good luck in the contest!:) Len Gasun January 8, 2017 at 6:33 AM Thank you so much my dear friend, Cheryl. So sorry for coming back to you late to thank you coz I was busy with a started project/assignment at school. But, I'll be back to visit you and others here soon as I'm done with those assigned tasks. Again, thank you so much and Good Luck as well. Many Hugs from me to you!

Supraja Kannan December 30, 2016 at 12:04 AM WOW...This is so beautiful... Really a great one... Reads like a winner...A big 7 for this cute crescent moon... Len Gasun December 30, 2016 at 11:21 PM Thank you so much my dear SK. I appreciate so much your lovely comment the big 7 and your kind visit. Hugs!

Tim Smith December 29, 2016 at 8:21 AM Great Leonora...Love the shape you created...I am in love with the moon and your poem shines Len Gasun December 30, 2016 at 11:20 PM Thank you so much my dear friend, Tim! Hugs!

Kim Rodrigues December 29, 2016 at 8:04 AM Nice one, Galeo! Len Gasun December 30, 2016 at 11:08 PM Thank you so much my dear Kim! Your visit and comment is very much appreciated. Hugs!

Anne-Lise Andresen December 29, 2016 at 7:51 AM - Beautiful poems, dear Leonora :) - Thanks for the year 2016 ... looking forward to a new year with new poems and friendship :) - Best wishes for a happy new year my friend - Love and hugs // Anne-Lise :) Len Gasun December 29, 2016 at 7:59 AM Thank you so much for the prompt read and comment on my poem my dear friend, Anne Lise. I dearly appreciate it. Thanks for the year 2016, too, your kindness, friendship and everything. I look forward too my dear. Best wishes and Advance Happy New Year! Many hugs from me to you!

Heidi Sands December 29, 2016 at 7:51 AM Very cool! Well done. :) Len Gasun December 29, 2016 at 8:01 AM Thank you so much my dear friend, Heidi. Advance Happy New Year! Hugs!