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Crescent Moon

C is for
                                                    Crescent moon
                                      Cuddling me so sweet
                                  Climb its ends
                          Climb with me.
                     Caress me, babe 
                 Cast spell on me.
              Cross my heart
         Consume all parts.
        Cry no more, dear                         
    Chrystal light cheers
     Capture its beauty 
      Crown of night sea                          
      Choice of bright stars
       Conductor of their choir
              Concert at dark sky
                Curved fluorescent light.
                  Come, look with delight
                         Call lovers to view its sight.       
                               Cloak a nightmare ‘til no more                
                                             Clear lantern up there.
                                                     Catch it if like falling pea
                                                                   Crescent moon is C


                              12/29/2016  8.55pm
©2016Leonora Galinta
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-experimenting a different kind of concrete :)

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Debbie Duncan Date: 5/23/2017 12:31:00 AM Awesome made me smile with your crescent moon, love it :) 7 Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 1/3/2017 3:47:00 PM Ahh!! Enjoyed the design and the thoughts..These are not so easy to do however yours is excellent..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Login to Reply Len Gasun Date: 1/8/2017 6:39:00 AM Thank you so much my dear friend, Sara for enjoying my experimental poem, your kind visit and your wonderful and encouraging comments. So much appreciated. Hugs! So sorry for my late expression of gratitude 'coz I just read your comment now. I was so busy with a started project/assignment at school but I promise to come back and visit you again and other poets as soon as I'm done with it. Always my pleasure to read your work too, so you're much welcome my dear friend. God bless you! Many hugs from me!

Cheryl Hoffman Date: 1/3/2017 6:35:00 AM This is a great concrete crescent moon poem Galeo; good luck in the contest!:) Login to Reply Len Gasun Date: 1/8/2017 6:33:00 AM Thank you so much my dear friend, Cheryl. So sorry for coming back to you late to thank you coz I was busy with a started project/assignment at school. But, I'll be back to visit you and others here soon as I'm done with those assigned tasks. Again, thank you so much and Good Luck as well. Many Hugs from me to you!

Supraja Kannan Date: 12/30/2016 12:04:00 AM WOW...This is so beautiful... Really a great one... Reads like a winner...A big 7 for this cute crescent moon... Login to Reply Len Gasun Date: 12/30/2016 11:21:00 PM Thank you so much my dear SK. I appreciate so much your lovely comment the big 7 and your kind visit. Hugs!

Tim Smith Date: 12/29/2016 8:21:00 AM Great Leonora...Love the shape you created...I am in love with the moon and your poem shines Login to Reply Len Gasun Date: 12/30/2016 11:20:00 PM Thank you so much my dear friend, Tim! Hugs!

Kim Rodrigues Date: 12/29/2016 8:04:00 AM Nice one, Galeo! Login to Reply Len Gasun Date: 12/30/2016 11:08:00 PM Thank you so much my dear Kim! Your visit and comment is very much appreciated. Hugs!

Heidi Sands Date: 12/29/2016 7:51:00 AM Very cool! Well done. :) Login to Reply Len Gasun Date: 12/29/2016 8:01:00 AM Thank you so much my dear friend, Heidi. Advance Happy New Year! Hugs!

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/29/2016 7:51:00 AM - Beautiful poems, dear Leonora :) - Thanks for the year 2016 ... looking forward to a new year with new poems and friendship :) - Best wishes for a happy new year my friend - Love and hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Len Gasun Date: 12/29/2016 7:59:00 AM Thank you so much for the prompt read and comment on my poem my dear friend, Anne Lise. I dearly appreciate it. Thanks for the year 2016, too, your kindness, friendship and everything. I look forward too my dear. Best wishes and Advance Happy New Year! Many hugs from me to you!