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Crescent Moon

Waning crescent moon rises Red sun rises adjacent Whip-poor-will's love affair short An arctic cold night
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Kerr Avatar
December 12, 2025 at 12:57 AM
Hi Sara, Another literary, lyrical triumph from your pen. Your use of colour and aspects of nature are simply a marvel. Howard
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December 12, 2025 at 5:17 AM
Thank you, Howard. I appreciate the kind review. Sara K
Dietrich Avatar
April 6, 2024 at 10:31 PM
Very nice, Sara. Are you ready for the coming eclipse. I don't suppose it will show much here in Utah
Kendrick Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 4:32 AM
Andrea, they say we will be able to see a crescent moon over the sun on Monday afternoon if the clouds don't come in too heavily. I am always weary of trying to look at one because of the danger it presents. I saw one way back. We all got the glasses for the occasion. I saw a lunar eclipse which was very spiritual in nature to me. Sara K
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April 6, 2024 at 8:03 PM
Beautiful words that made me smile, Aysha
Kendrick Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 4:30 AM
Thank you, Aysha. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara K
Daniel Avatar
April 6, 2024 at 8:50 AM
Lovely imagery, Sara:)
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April 6, 2024 at 12:37 PM
Why, thank you, Joanna. I appreciate the visit and smiley face. Sara K
Poet Avatar
April 5, 2024 at 7:12 PM
Your poetry Sara is both beautiful and thought-provoking. The mental picture you painted with your words is beautiful. What a delightful read. Hope everything is going great for you.
Kendrick Avatar
April 6, 2024 at 3:58 AM
May your life be filled with delightful memories and love galore, Lasaad. I am delighted you liked my poem. Sara K
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April 5, 2024 at 6:43 AM
Dear Sara, Wow, I love how nature's delicate dance unfolds in the waning crescent's glow. The crimson sun and moon share fleeting moments while the whip-poor-will's love whispers fade into the Arctic night's embrace. Your words artistically show the ephemeral beauty and longing in the stillness of the night. - Blessings, Daniel
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April 5, 2024 at 1:34 PM
Thanks for the blessings, Daniel. I need all I can get. It was a beautiful sunrise with the presence of the rises moon crescent moon all there together. Sara K
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