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Crescendo My Heart

Crescendo heart of cranberry sparks passion So hot my mind takes a hazel heat thrashing Melting silhouette on my brain A love tattoo of the insane Your scent is like lint on peach pillow I cling to it for makes me mellow Stealing your tshirt for my clothes Acting really hurt if you won’t let it go I drink your spirit like red wine Could never fear it you are kind Forever my lover you are mine From this day forward in time

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Date: 12/9/2024 12:22:00 AM
I love this. Passion, longing and affection captured with intensity and tenderness. A fave for me. ^__^ JCB
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Karen Jones
Date: 12/9/2024 12:26:00 AM
Jcb I am honored you fav it! Hugs thanks!
Date: 12/6/2024 7:43:00 PM
This is romantic and endearing. "Forever my lover you are mine" is my favorite line.
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Karen Jones
Date: 12/6/2024 10:20:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 12/3/2024 6:18:00 AM
Sounds like a strong feeling and attraction Karen. Cool how much we can fall for these feelings. Nice love poem indeed! Smiles!
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Karen Jones
Date: 12/3/2024 8:47:00 AM
Thanks Duke!
Date: 12/2/2024 10:02:00 AM
Loved the rhyming without all the complications some poets offer. If I were in school this would be the grade I'm in.
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Karen Jones
Date: 12/2/2024 12:32:00 PM
Thanks for reading and your kind comment John!

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