Crescendo My Heart

Crescendo heart of cranberry sparks passion 
So hot my mind takes a hazel heat thrashing 
Melting silhouette on my brain
A love tattoo of the insane

Your scent is like lint on peach pillow
I cling to it for makes me mellow
Stealing your tshirt for my clothes
Acting really hurt if you won’t let it go

I drink your spirit like red wine
Could never fear it you are kind
Forever my lover you are mine
From this day forward in time
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Brul Avatar
December 9, 2024 at 12:22 AM
I love this. Passion, longing and affection captured with intensity and tenderness. A fave for me. ^__^ JCB
Jones Avatar
December 9, 2024 at 12:26 AM
Jcb I am honored you fav it! Hugs thanks!
Greenhough Avatar
December 6, 2024 at 7:43 PM
This is romantic and endearing. "Forever my lover you are mine" is my favorite line.
Jones Avatar
December 6, 2024 at 10:20 PM
Thank you!
Beaufort Avatar
December 3, 2024 at 6:18 AM
Sounds like a strong feeling and attraction Karen. Cool how much we can fall for these feelings. Nice love poem indeed! Smiles!
Jones Avatar
December 3, 2024 at 8:47 AM
Thanks Duke!
Loving Iii Avatar
December 2, 2024 at 10:02 AM
Loved the rhyming without all the complications some poets offer. If I were in school this would be the grade I'm in.
Jones Avatar
December 2, 2024 at 12:32 PM
Thanks for reading and your kind comment John!
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