Sharon Ruebel Poet Tanka

Creepy Feeling

Something was watching

        leaving a creepy feeling

            i could not shake it

                finally closing the door

                    behind me eyes in the tree...

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Larry Berdoo March 31, 2014 at 5:39 PM Thats funny, I will never look at my tree the same.

Monterey Sirak October 30, 2013 at 6:52 AM Eerie!! Love the ending. Sharon Ruebel October 30, 2013 at 11:01 AM Thank you for visiting, a little boo for sure. SMiles, Shar

Ken Carroll October 29, 2013 at 12:45 PM Hi Sharon, Got goosebumps reading this one..Great Halloween mood write.. Ken Sharon Ruebel October 30, 2013 at 11:02 AM Just a little Halloween Boo for you...Thank you for visiting. As Always, Shar

Jim Tidd October 29, 2013 at 12:05 PM OK. Who do you have the restraining order on? :) Sharon Ruebel October 30, 2013 at 11:02 AM Haaaaaaaaaaaaaaa, thank you for stopping by James. As Always, Shar

Anne-Lise Andresen October 28, 2013 at 3:35 PM - HAPPY HALLOWEEN, SHARON !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Sharon Ruebel October 28, 2013 at 3:41 PM Boo Thank you sweetheart....You also............Lov, Shar