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Poetry/Rhyme/Creepy Dream
Copyright Protected, ID 06-1555-525-15
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written June 15, 2023
For the Standard Contest, Don't Fight It - Write It
sponsor, John Lawless, Judged 06/25/2023

First Place 

a close up of a man with blue eyes

I was having a nice dream of Paris, - and walking along winding cobbled streets; till I came upon a garden terrace, to sip sweet wine called Sherris ... a man sat down- though there were lots of seats. He was so delightful and quite polite, - we talked and talked for hours of all things; he asked, would you like to go for a bite, we fly into the dark night ... he drove so fast- his car seemed to have wings. I have to admit by now I was scared, - the structure was cold and not like a house; he turned to look right at me and just glared, his stare left me unprepared ... his house- was dark and quiet as a mouse. He was dragging me as I fought with him, - he was different more demon than man; oh, my future was looking very grim, kissing me, he held each limb ... that is when the brutal assault began. Remember now how this was just a dream, - but, I will wake up trembling and weeping; oh, this has become a real nightmare theme, one that I find quite extreme ... I fear, fear- that the demon is creeping.

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Date: 6/26/2023 9:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Creepy Dream" is a nightmare I would not want to have. A wonderful write/story. Have a blessed day writing away.....................
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Constance La France
Date: 6/26/2023 12:38:00 PM
Paula, thank you so much for the congratulations, compliment and comment, yes it was a creepy poem for sure !
Date: 6/16/2023 3:13:00 AM
Wow Constance what a dream. You skillfully wrote a heartfelt piece that leaves the reader worried for you and hoping to never ever have this dream repeat, and wishing you would forget this horrible dream. Wishing you well and I hope you are well my Dear... Hugs...
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Constance La France
Date: 6/17/2023 5:03:00 PM
Michael, thank you for the comment and compliment, I am quite the storyteller, its just make-believe !
Date: 6/15/2023 3:44:00 PM
So terrifying! I'll never sleep again... well I already don't but that's another story! I'm totally creeped out by your set of circumstances in your poem! Great job!
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Constance La France
Date: 6/17/2023 5:02:00 PM
Robert, thanks for the comment, it is creeping but it is also just make-believe !

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