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Creeping Chaos

A leaf, curled and crimson, bends beneath branches, burdened by cold and creeping chaos.

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Ink Empress

Date: 4/7/2025 9:09:00 AM

Awwn sis you posted it here too! Love this one truly! The alliterations, the vivid imagery youv painted with such artistic adjectives, and how through your words i see the crimson leaf curled, beneath branches! So much aching depth in the way youv woven this! Made me sigh and read it more than once! A FAV this is for me! Sending you light always

Billie Jama
Date: 4/9/2025 6:48:00 PM

Thank you so much for your kind words. I'm pleased to hear that the imagery resonated with you. Your support means the a lot. Sending you light and love right back